Mahou Shoujo Lovelina

Hey y'all, I've finally been getting some inspiration for stuff lately, and as such I've been trying to actually get some work done on a new profile.  Since I made some progress tonight I thought I'd post what I have so far.  I want to know what you all think so far and if you have any ideas of directions I should take.  As it stands, the concept is that she has three forms: magical girl, idol, and duelist.  The duelist form is for close-quarters/melee, the idol is more long range/support, and the magical girl is kinda all-around.  So far my inspiration has been strongest with the duelist, and I have a feeling I'll finish that first, then probably the magical girl, then the idol.  However, we'll see how the dice fall.  If I get some good input here, that could lead to inspiration for me and stuff getting done better and faster.


Mahou Shoujo Lovelina

Description: innocent-looking young girl who wanders around in cute, normal clothing, with bright blonde hair pulled into long pigtails.  Seemingly innocuous until she is either attacked or sees someone she wants to play with.  

Transform (magical girl form): upon seeing someone she wants to play with, she'll pull out a bejeweled golden lipstick tube and say "I'm gonna make you feel the love!" as the jewels glow, she takes off the cap and runs the lipstick over her lips, causing them to shine brightly.  Bathed in dazzling lights, she undergoes a transformation sequence where her plain clothing becomes a gorgeous, frilly pink magical girl dress, complete with petticoat, stockings, big pink bows in her hair, with matching eyeshadow and lipgloss.  At the end of her transformation, her lipstick tube transforms into an elegant wand with a bright pink heart jewel at the end.  Throughout the transformations she'll strike many cute poses, flashing her target winks and smiles.  Raises charm and brings the attention of her target to her.  Lovelina will usually start an encounter transforming into her magical girl form and depending on the fight may use other forms.


Magical girl form





Bodacious duelist form

Strategy: short range, seduce during duel, actively work to arouse opponent to make it more difficult for them to fight, especially if their opponent is male they will actively work to make them erect to make it more difficult for them to fight.  

Transform (bodacious duelist form): Lovelina will call out "alright; time for this fight to get hot; hot pink!" with that she'll kiss the heart jewel and pirouettes gracefully, spreading sparkles all around her and gathering energy that swirls around her, forming a dome that shows only her silhouette. Within her dome, she undergoes a transformation: her legs become longer, her breasts more buxom, her rear more bodacious, and her hair shifts from pig tails to an elegant bob as her body structure changes to become more mature. Her outfit also melts away and is replaced by knee-high boots, a black corset that accentuates her phenomenal breasts, and tight pink leggings that perfectly frame her pert butt. Her wand changes into a long rapier as the heart gem moves to the hilt and the rod itself extends into a blade. As the transformation ends she'll strike a flirtatious pose and point her sword right at her opponent flashing them a quick wink. Raises opponent's charm slightly, increases Lovelina's speed and strength. Usually will use this form against opponents that use melee attacks and/or have a weapon.

Deft hands (passive): throughout close encounters, Lovelina's free hand will delicately dance across her opponent, caressing them gingerly and paying special attention to their genitals, often taking chances to stroke that area and cause her opponent to lose their cool and become aroused.

Tantalizing taunt: "Heeeeey honeylooooooove!" Lovelina will call to her opponent, catching their attention. "I bet you're afraid to fight a giiiiiiiiiirl!" She says with a giggle, turning around and showing off her rear to her enemy, wiggling it cutely before giving it a loud spank, sending off a shower of bright pink hearts. She'll continue to spank herself a few more times, each slap causing another shower of hearts, charming her opponent more as the display continues. Peaking around with her butt still wiggling, she'll wink and blow them a kiss, sending out a small heart that flutters over and slaps her target on the cheek, giving them the feeling of both being struck and tenderly kissed at the same time in the same spot. Charms opponent and also forces them to engage her in close-quarters combat.

Bodacious bump: "Ooh, just a little love tap~<3" while fighting in close quarters with her target, Lovelina will counter her opponent's attack, riposting with a wide flourish, allowing her to turn around and bump her pert rear up against her opponent's crotch, sending up a fountain of charming hearts. If given the opportunity, she will continue to rub her bum against their crotch, sending out magical energies to stimulate the area, and if the target is male she'll pay great attention to their length, rubbing up against it with her soft, pillowy cushions. Raises lust and charm, works especially well on male targets.

Reveal yourself: once her opponent has become sufficiently aroused, Lovelina will chuckle furtively and make a series of quick swipes of her blade at her opponent's pants, causing them to fall to shreds at their feet and completely exposing their sex. "Well would you look at that? Someone's excited to see me, and I'm pretty sure that's you~<3" Doesn't add to charm level of opponent, but will increase the effect of many of Lovelina's attacks as their most sensitive area is now completely exposed. Also opens them up to her finishers....

To the victor goes the spoils (finisher, male): looking down on her opponent's throbbing manhood, she'll begin to confidently stride over to them, her glittery pink lips curled into a wide grin. "Oh well would you look at that; I think I've won." When her opponent gives her a confused look, unsure how she had indeed won over him, she brings her sword down and taps the flat of the blade against her own crotch, and in a burst of sparkles a heart-shaped opening appears in her tights, exposing herself to them and sending a deep blush across their face. "And now it's time for me to claim my prize; c'mere, you...." dropping her blade to the ground, she slowly saunters toward her opponent, her eyes locked with theirs like a tiger approaching its prey. Almost entranced, they'll walk toward her as well, as if there were an invisible robe around their length that pulled them toward her. Upon meeting, Lovelina will pull them into a tight embrace, kissing them passionately while rubbing her opening against them. "And now you're mine!" With that she'll impale herself upon his length, letting out a powerful moan right into their ear, sending waves of magic through their mind and body and increasing pleasure. Slowly moving her hips back and forth, she will pump and pump away until they climax, causing them to fall unconscious while Lovelina stands over them, victorious. "Oh when will I find a good opponent? That was fun, but I want a challenge!"

Struck through the heart (finisher, female): looking down on her opponent's dripping opening, she'll begin to confidently stride over to them, her glittery pink lips curled into a wide grin. "Oh well would you look at that; I think I've won." When her opponent gives her a confused look, unsure how she had indeed defeated her, Lovelina will kiss the gem upon her sword, causing a bright light to emit from it. The sword will then change shape from a rapier into a foot-long rod with a rounded tip and perfectly smooth sides. Bringing the tip of the rod up to her lips, she kisses the tip and flicks it toward her opponent, sending a small pink heart fluttering out and over to her target's vagina. The heart pops against her opening, sending an earth-shattering shock of pleasure throughout her body, causing her to fall to her knees with pleasure. Now breathing heavily, Lovelina approaches her with a wide grin and kneels down before her, gazing deeply into her eyes. "It's time to finish you off; now pucker up for your goodbye kiss~<3" With one hand she'll take her blushing opponent's chin and pull her into a deep kiss, distracting her while her other hand slowly guides the rod down to her opening and thrusts it in, causing another shock of pleasure to spread across the woman. Lovelina will continue pumping away at her with her rod, sending shock after shock of wild pleasure as the two moan into each other's kiss. Eventually, the woman will climax, causing her to fall over unconscious as Lovelina lets out a long sigh, looking over their body with a victorious grin. "Teehee, you tasted great! Maybe next time you'll get to finish me off."



Eye-catching idol form

Really cool idea here zesquid! Having 3 different forms is interesting,  and they all seem unique and varied enough to work with. I suppose that the magical girl is going to have more cutesy/love attacks, with the duelist having more seductive/lust attacks, going off of whats here already. I'm not sure what your ideas are for these forms, but here are a few to maybe help you out:

- If you're having one for be loving and one more lustful, maybe the other could be a combination of both that make the player lose the will to fight
-Perhaps an "ultimate form", maybe one that combines all 3 forms that has special or more powerful moves.
- If the idol form is long ranged, it should have attacks like blown kisses, projectiles, etc. The magical girl could have a few projectile attacks and melee attacks if it's all around, but to differentiate it, could have magic spells, like ones that give the player adverse side effects, increase her power, or attack spells that bind the player, charm them, etc.
- For personalities, duelist could be more of a cocky (no pun intended), taunting girl, the magical girl could be an innocent, sweet girl, and the idol perhaps a mature and cool girl? I dunno. But each should have a distinct personality to correspond with their different move sets
-Unique finishers for each form
-Maybe a different "gimmick" for each form, such as basing attacks using lipstick and marking her target, one focusing on kissing a certain part of the body or kissing in a certain way(cheek, lips, etc.), using spells to charm the target into kissing rather than kissing causing charm (it'd be a nice variation), or whatever else. 
- Maybe one could be more flirty with her moves, sweet talking to the player as she attacks, while another could just take action, attacking with not saying as much, or talking in a different manner, aka taunting vs flirting/complimenting, etc.

I realize I repeated myself a few times so sorry bout that. I just kinda typed things as they came to me. Hopefully some of these will help, and I can't wait to find out where your inspiration goes with this zesquid, as I think it's a neat idea. Good luck!

All very good ideas! I'm still trying to get into the groove of all of these; so far I'm really into the duelist form, but I'm trying to get a good idea to go from on the idol and magical girl forms. I know my general idea for both, but I'm waiting for the specifics to hit me.

Regarding personalities, I kinda want them all to be in a similar vein; flirty, perky, bright, but in some kinda different ways. The duelist is a bit more confident, the magical girl is a bit more cutesy, and the idol maybe... hmm.... not sure exactly. Still figuring the idol form out; that one's starting to come together in my mind but I'm still a ways away.

Something just hit me; for the personality of the idol, maybe make her a bit haughty and self-absorbed? Seeking adoration?

Edit: just updated it with a full moveset for the duelist form and I'm REALLY happy with it, especially with the two finishers. What do you all think?

Really like the duelist zesquid! And regarding the idol, I think that personality would be perfect for her! She could act as if she deserves everyone's adoration and those that don't love her haven't been "enlightened, " so to speak. Love it so far though and I'm looking forward to the other forms

Idol version... Maid version. Swimsuit version.

Hot damn Zesquid! Definitely one of my favorite literature pages on here and it's not even done yet! Can't wait to see the finished product!

ey zesquid nice job dawg. dis profile is kickin if ya no wat i mean lol