Taisho The Light Lancer (WIP)

Taisho was trained by a light magician who traveled with him seeing his more dangerous and master in Close combat with weapons his master give him the acces to manipulate the light combined with the metal of his weapons

Description: have 23 years old ,brown hair golden eyes, his skin is a bit brown he have a golden and red armor ,also his spear is golden because of his ligth element , he is taller than others guys having 1.89 in stature

Psicogic description: he is very cold and a guy of few words ,he don't speak unless is really needed ,he don't fall easily on seduction or suggestion this is why he have a very strong will 

Passive: 
-A Men of an iron Will: an Attack that infatuate ,charm or affect his mental state liie charms need two Rolls for charm him , "if you want to change my mind then you have to do it really hard"

Basic attack: Spear stab - deal 2 damage, basically taisho run toward his oponent piercing them with his spear

Lightning spear: Taisho throws his spear at the sky then it returns toward the oponent in form of a lightning 
Taisho gain agility Buff : enemies roll at disadvantage -buff duration: 2 turns-
-Deal 2 damage 

Spear shielded: Taisho began to girate his spear forming a shield with it image allowing them to protect himself from one attack 
Shield duration: 1 attack

Heart seeking blow: Taisho rapidly thrust his spear in the chest of his oponent making a chain of  5 blows ,dealing 1 damage each hit ,in crit failure taisho will throw his spear away from losing it grip

Solar aura: taisho absorbs solar energy and imbue his body in solar Energy to decrease the damage taken physically and willpower
-1 willpower/stamina damage taken in the next 2 turns

Rain of spears: equal to lightning spear but a rain of spear will fall upon the target , can be  used against múltiple enemies
6 hits until fail , 1 Dmg


Up and down: jump and incert his spear In the floor in front of the target causing a little tremnling making them fall
Downed
2 DMG


Is for me and now for you: only used on proyectiles (blow kiss,hearts etc) ,uses his spear to redirect an proyectile in form of a lightning orb
2 dmg

Weakness: Cuteness: being the hero of a village with more womans than mans give weakness for cute girls or attacks based on it ,he will doubt in struggling while being cuddled or being kissed in a cute way (Disadvantage )

Maid: Real maids or girls that have maid outfit Will deal + 1 damage

Just some... preemtive questions before I start the RP.

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Lightning spear: Taisho throws his spear at the sky then it returns toward the oponent in form of a lightning
Can deal paralyzis
Taisho gain agility Buff : enemies roll at disadvantage -buff duration: 2 turns-
-Deal 3 damage

What does Paralysis do? is it just a stun?

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Heart seeking blow: Taisho rapidly thrust his spear in the chest of his oponent dealing 2 damage each pierce he deal and cause perforated
Perforated: the next attack will deal +2 attacks
4 hits

A multi-hit move that does more than 1 damage per hit and deals a debuff? That seems... kind of overpowered.

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Rain of spears: equal to lightning spear but a rain of spear will fall upon the target , can be used against múltiple enemies
Bound + fear 3 dmg

What do you mean by 'equal to lightning spear'? Also, what does fear do?

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Up and down: jump and incert his spear In the floor in front of the target causing a little tremnling making them fall
Floored
Crit succes efect: Dizy

I'm assuming by Floored, you mean Downed? And what does Dizzy do?

1- Yes is just a stun
2- i'll rework it then the hits will 1 dmg and change the debuff
3- i mean is the same like the attack mentioned and fear will make the rolls have disadvantage
4- yeah floored is downed ,just another word for disadvantage maybe i have to change that to

Edit: Reading the rules i read paralyzis grants autohit next turn and it seem i better change dizzy for dazed

A bunch of his attacks deal three damage, and multiple statuses at once, which is kinda strong when said statues are basically disadvantages or stuns, or even a bind....

Okay,thanks for the feedback then i'll remove the statuses for balance

Well i balanced all moves so only one deal 3 dmg ,more feedback is welcome

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Solar aura: taisho absorbs solar energy and imbue his body in solar Energy to decrease the damage taken physically and willpower
-2 willpower/stamina damage taken in the next 2 turns

In the case of the damage received being 2 or 1, does it goes below 1 nullifying the attack? Or it has a minimum of 1? That is something to keep in mind when making this kind of damage reduction effects, specially considering that he already has a damage nullifier.

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Rain of spears: equal to lightning spear but a rain of spear will fall upon the target , can be used against múltiple enemies
3 dmg

If this is an AoE attack, you might want to rethink the damage or set a limit of enemies the attack can hit.

That's right so i'll change the damage reduction to 1 and place CD so he can't spam the two nullifiers at the same time or just block one when the othe is used like "when spear shielded is used he can't use solar aura"

And for the Aoe i'll limit the cuantity of enemies the attack can hit

Sorry but one final problem.

Heart Seeking Blow says it does 1 damage with each hit, but doesn't mention how many times it can hit.

Edited, well i think is the last one

Can i face him with trish

No problem

Ok, i create the room