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PostSubject: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Sat Dec 15, 2012 2:39 pm

just an idea but how about a fic where a temptress/monstergirl tries to seduce a heroine and the heroine is trying to seduce the villain back, kinda like a power struggle hypno or something


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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Sat Dec 15, 2012 6:02 pm

Lol im into hetero but yuri is fine too. What kind? Is it a Dullahan named Mami Tom- *is shot*
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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Sat Dec 15, 2012 9:29 pm

Sounds good, anon. I would love to see a villainess get "corrupted" by a heroine.
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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Tue Dec 18, 2012 8:45 pm

That's a clever, silly idea. XD I'd like to see it, but I'd have difficulty not finding it funny.
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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Wed Dec 19, 2012 11:51 am

cool, this seems to have a lot of support, i dont know when i'll get it done though, especially as at the moment i have another fic in the works and with the holidays so i wont be giving a release date to this
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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Thu Dec 20, 2012 2:42 pm

looking forward to it and i'm not really into girl on girl so that's saying something Razz
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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Wed Jan 02, 2013 10:29 am

Jessica was wandering through the K'lat Forest, she had just succesfully raided an infamous succubus's lair and had liberated the succubized citizens within. She needed to find a place to rest soon however, as she was weakened from the encounter, and if she was ambushed now she wouldn't have enough mana to fight back. She guessed she was about a mile from K'lat city now, she continued onwards until she felt someone wrap their arms around her neck from behind, whoever it was pushed her to the ground with ease. Jessica managed to force her attacker off her for long enough so she could roll onto her back and get a look at what she was about to fight, it was the girl whom Jessica had managed to free mid succubization, she must have been too late. Jessica found herself staring into the succubuss's beautiful eyes, she found herself getting lost in them while her attacker leaned slowly closer before stealing a kiss. While the girl kissed her passionately, Jessica desperately tried to fight off the pleasure flowing from the Succubus's lips, maybe she had enough mana to try a force spell to free herself, she managed to move her hand to the succubus's chest and focused as had as she could....Nothing, Jessica just lay there dumbly with her hand on her attackers chest, but something strange had happened, the succubus slowly released her from the kiss, and was blushing gently. Jessica used this moment to push her off and get to her feet, she smiled coyly at the succubus "

I interrupted your succubization before they could take away your emotions didn't I..." She had an idea, it was a long shot but it could be the only way she would ever leave this forest,

"You think I'm cute, don't you" she purred. The succubus said nothing, so jessica blew her a playful kiss, this taunt however, was enough to break the succubus's confusion .

She called to Jessica "But you were eager to lose yourself in my kiss, weren't you..." as she said this she leaned forwards, giving Jessica a quick glimpse of her beautiful cleavage. Jessica couldn't help but stare and the Succubus used this moment of distraction to dash up to Jessica and push her back against a nearby tree, pressing her breasts right up to Jessica's face
"Go on, indulge yourself in me little heroine..." The Succubus cooed "My names Clara by the way, in case you feel like screaming it later" While these honey soaked words wear sinking in, Jessica found herself slowly moving both of her hands to Clara's chest, she began to affectionately stroke them before remembering, she had to put her new plan into action, she couldn't give up yet. Quickly, Jessica kissed the Succubus on the cheek, then the other, she was happy to notice a slightly dumb looking smile spread across the girls face

"If you liked that..." Jessica whispered before licking the succubus's cheek and across her lips, causing the smile to widen furthermore "You'll love this" as soon as she finished the words she put one arm around the back of Clara's head and pulled her into a soft, french kiss. While kissing the Succubus however, Jessica was faintly aware of her own lust rising within her, she just had to focus on what she was doing, and not let in consume her like it had so many other heroines.

After a while however, it was becoming too much and she felt the need to break the kiss, however just before she was about to pull away she felt Claras tongue movement slow down, surely a sign of her weakening, jessica couldn't stop now, however as she carried on she felt her thrall rest her hands on her back and arse, and begin to massage her. Immediately aware of the danger Jessica pulled away, but in doing so gave Clara an even better angle from which to massage her from, she pushed Jessica once more agains the tree, this time with her back to her and set to work. The great relaxation that came from this was enough to make Jessica slump to the floor, Clara lovingly kissed the back of Jessica's neck and rolled her over to face her.

"This has been fun sweety, but lets stop this little game right now" Clara purred, before quickly kissing Jessica on the lips. As soon as Claras lips met hers, a new found lust flowed through her and she grabbed Clara's head and pulled the temptresses face between her breasts, she just wanted every inch of Claras body right now, she hugged Clara tight and began hungrily kissing her neck and cheek, however this lust faded quickly and she stopped for a second, before realizing that she could quite well have saved herself with that lustful outburst, now in control of her thoughts, Jessica began to massage the succubus's face in between her breasts, she could win this... But suddenly she felt a beautiful sensation coming from her chest, Clara was licking and kissing her well formed breasts, this feeling distracted Jessica for just long enough for her to move the kisses to Jessica's nipples, the pleasure was unbelievable and within a matter of seconds the succubus was lying next to Jessica, gently stroking her face. Clara then leaned in and softly kissed Jessica again and again, thoughts of submission lazily swam through the heroines cloudy mind, how nice it would be just to stay here, to be Clara's pretty little pet, how nice, how perfect...



Should i write a part 2 or even 3 depending on how well recieved this is
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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Wed Jan 02, 2013 11:40 pm

I like where this thread is going
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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Thu Jan 03, 2013 5:48 pm

This is some of your best writing yet, write moar damnit
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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Mon Jan 07, 2013 8:05 pm

man i always enjoy reading your writing looking forward to part two


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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Fri Jan 11, 2013 12:47 pm

Part 2 pleaseeee
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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Sat Jan 12, 2013 10:41 am

Please write more of this, anon64!
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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Sat Jan 12, 2013 2:14 pm

will be able to start work on part 2 tomorrow night, looking for 3 parts, im definately going to write more in this style afterwards though.

also for part 3 inbox me (so only i know) your vote for the outcome of the story, who you want to win.
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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Sun Jan 20, 2013 1:44 pm

we're at a tie in votes and this is probably only gonna be 2 parts now so i really need one more vote at least
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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Sun Jan 20, 2013 10:29 pm

Vote for what?
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PostSubject: Re: fic idea PART ONE FINISHED   Mon Jan 21, 2013 10:30 am

look at my previous post
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