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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Fri Jun 21, 2013 12:57 pm | |
| Chapter 3: - Spoiler:
Succubus Dungeon New Slave #3 Cover: Not sure yet. ________________________________________________________________________________ Panel 1: Slave's POV. Purple and him are in the same positions as the end of the last chapter, but Pink has gotten up and is kneeling next to purple on the slave's left. She's looking toward the slave, but digging around for something in her purse at the same time. Pink: "Alright buddy, we've been taking it slow so far. Now let's see what you're really made of!" Panel 2: Close up for a heart-shaped stop watch like item in Pink's hand. It has 3 bits of information on it: an orgasm counter for the girls on the upper-left part, denoted with a little heart, an ejaculation counter on the right side, denoted by a little picture of a cumming penis, and a longer field below both of those for time (this doesn't need a label). Pink has just started the timer and a few seconds have gone by. Pink: "Time for a free-for-all fuck fest! This will time you from now until you're all dried up, keep track of how many times you cum, and how many times you can make either of us cum. Afterward it'll score your overall virility." Panel 3: Purple has her hands on the slave's abdomen and is starting to really ride his cock now. Pink has gotten up and is now standing over his face. The timer's just lying on the bed. Pink: "I'd be lying if I said there was a reward for a high score..." Panel 4: Slave's POV as Pink's coming down on his face with her vagina. Pink (mostly off-panel): "But you'll get to fuck us more!" Panel 5: Pink and Purple look as though they're in a lot of pleasure as the slave fucks one and eats out the other. Pink is biting her lip and is squinting while Purple has he eyes closed and her mouth open. Pink: "Of course, you'll be a squiggly if you do poorly..." Purple: "(whatever types of sensual moans/screams you like to use) it's going so deep!" Pink: "I wouldn't worry if I were you, though." Panel 6: Close up of Pink's pelvic region and whatever parts of the slave's face are visible (I'm not sure how big her vagina is relative to his head, is all). The slave looks shocked. It should be implied via sound effects that he's licking away inside her. Panel 7: The slave's muscles are getting tense, making him look stronger, and he's reaching up toward Pink's waist. (whatever angle you want to show this from is fine). Panel 8: The slave is holding Pink's waist, pushing it up against his face as he gives her more aggressive cunnilingus and has thrust up violently into Purple, actually lifting her up for a moment with his pelvis. There's a good deal of vaginal fluid from Purple wherever it would make sense on the slave and around that area of the bed. Likewise Pink seems to be really wet as well. Both girls looked shocked. Purple: "Looks like our natural aphrodisiacs are kicking in!" Panel 9: Pink's grabbed the slave's hands, taken them off her waist (his human strength is still weaker than theirs despite the aphrodisiac invigorating him), and is now pressing them against her breasts. The slave's still giving Pink head and fucking Purple, if you want to have sound effects from either in the panel. Pink: "Give me those!" Panel 10: Purple's leaning back with her breasts up in the air and her head tilted back as the slave continues to fuck her hard. Her face should communicate that she's really being fucked silly (tongue hanging out and squinty? You'd probably know better than me) and both her arms are just kind of dangling behind her (or on the slaves legs or the bed if either makes more sense). Pink has an expression on her face similar to Purple's. Her breasts are being squeezed by the slave and everything from her waist down should seem tense as she's about to cum (if the pose she had before already looked this way then that's fine). Purple: "Lilith, I'm about to cum!" Pink: "Yeah, me too..." Panel 11: All three characters are having massive orgasms. Pink is squirting a bit on the slave's face (so there's some shooting out as she's still pressed up against his mouth) and a lot of semen is blasting out of Purple's vagina, which still has the slave's member in it. Panel 12: Purple, still on the slave's cock, looks relaxed. Sound effects of some sort emanating from her belly suggest that she's "gulping" up the slave's load. The cum that shot out of her in the last panel is all over his torso and the bed. Purple: "Did you know we can feed with our vaginas too?" Panel 13: Pink is licking sperm off the slave's shaft as Purple has just dismounted him, causing some more excess cum to drip out of her. Pink: "I really doubt he can understand you." Panel 14: Slave's POV as he watches Pink lick cum off his cock and Purple start to massage his balls. Due to the strong aphrodisiacs in their vaginal fluids everything in his perspective is a bit blurred except for the girls and there's a pink hue over everything. His heart is pounding hard (whatever sounds you like to use to show this). Pink: "With all that juice he just had he's probably just a mindless fuck-drone at this point." Panel 15: Pink and Purple are to the left and right of the slave's cock, whose balls are facing the viewer (so opposite of the last panel's view). Both girls are looking at it as each massages a testicle of his and Pink strokes his shaft. Pink: "Like a big squiggly with a body..." Panel 16: The girls are in similar positions but the slave is standing up. Purple looks curious while Pink (who's still holding his shaft) looks agitated. Pink: "Hey! Did I tell you to..." Panel 17: The slave has positioned himself behind Pink and lifted her legs up from behind, bringing her pelvic region up to his, but has yet to insert. Purple has stood up as well. Pink is laying on her breasts and turning her head back toward the slave. She has a devious look on her face. Pink: "Oh, getting bold are we?" Panel 18: The slave rams his cock into Pink's vagina causing some of her juices to splash out. Panel 19: The slave is fucking Pink as Purple steps over her body (so she can stand in front of the slave with Pink between her legs). Panel 20: Purple wraps her arms around the slave and starts making out with him. Her breasts are pressed up against his chest. Panel 21: View from behind showing the slave fucking Pink hard. His balls are swinging back and forth and Pink's breasts can be seen pressing against the sheets toward the bottom of the panel. Panel 22: Pink from the front, blushing and gripping the bed sheets as she licks up some cum from before. Panel 23: The slave, who now has some Purple kissmarks on his cheeks and forehead, is sucking on Purple's tit as she pets his head. Purple looks like she's enjoying it. Panel 24: Similar view to the last panel. The slave throws his head back in ecstasy as he cums. Purple has her chest pressed up against his and takes delight in seeing his orgasm face. ________________________________________________________________________________ Panel 25: Another view of the slave and Pink's genitalia as he ejaculates, causing some cum to squirt out of Pink's vagina. Panel 26: Pink is a similar position to panel 22, but looking over her should with an agitated expression on her face. Purple (off panel except for maybe a bit of her ass or legs): "My turn?" Pink: "I haven't cum yet! Get out of the way, Meri!" Panel 27: Pink has pushed herself off the bed, sending the slave falling backward as she remains on his penis. Purple, who is now standing next to them, looks surprised. Panel 28: Pink and the slave have landed in a reverse cowgirl position with a thud causing some of the cum from panel 25 to splash up. Pink: "I'm setting the pace now, and you're going to have to do a lot better than that if you want to satisfy me!" Panel 29: View from above as Pink starts fucking the slave again. She's leaning back a bit, placing her hands on him for support, and has her face turned up so it's facing the viewer. Her eyes are closed and her mouth's open as she indulges in pleasure. Panel 30: A close up of Purple's hands grabbing Pink's breasts (she's reaching around from behind her). Panel 31: A view from the chest upward of Pink with Purple's face visible over her shoulder. Purple is playing with her nipples. Purple looks devious. Pink: "You're just trying to make me cum faster, aren't you." Purple: "Are you saying I should stop?" Panel 32: A view of Pink's face as she goes "HA!". Pink: "Is that a challenge? Ha! Try even harder if you like!" Panel 33: A close up of Pink and the slave's genitalia as she continues to fuck him. There's a good deal of cum and vaginal fluid running down his shaft and balls. Purple's hand can be seen rubbing Pink's clitoris. Pink: "In fact, I'll bet you 2 liters of fresh sperm I can fuck him dry before either of you get me off!" Purple: "You're on!" Panel 34: A view showing all of Pink from the front as she continues to fuck the slave. Purple is licking her neck, playing with one of Pink's breasts, and continuing to finger her clitoris. Cum is shooting out of Pink's vagina as the slave cums again, but it shouldn't look as though him ejaculating is changing her rhythm. Pink's face should indicate she's feeling a lot of pleasure, but concentrating on holding off an orgasm. Panel 35: The slave's sweating, panting, and is starting to look a bit weak/dried out, but not as much so as the spent slave in the first panel of the comic. Two ejaculation sound effects are coming from off panel to indicate that he's still being made to ejaculate. Panel 36: Purple is looking back at the slave, concerned that she may actually lose the bet she just made. Another ejaculation sound can be heard. Purple (thinking to herself): "Crap, Lilith might actually win this. Unless..." Panel 37: With a flash Purple has used her magic to make a stick of white lipstick and a pink packet (same color as the liquid and food mush from the second chapter) with a simple drawing of testicles on it. Panel 38: Purple is pouring a pink powder from that packet onto her tongue. Another ejaculation sound is coming from the side of the panel. Pink (off panel): "What happened, Meri? Your hands getting tired!?" Panel 39: Purple's face is looming over the slave's as she swishes the powder mix around in her mouth, mixing a drink for him with her saliva. The slave looks to be in anguish as he cums yet again. If possible, whatever sound effect you use should make it seem like it was a weaker ejaculation. Panel 40: Purple is French kissing the slave as he swallows the drink she just made for him. Pink (off panel): "Hey! What do you think you're doing!?" Panel 41: Pink (still riding his cock) is looking down at the slave's balls, which are filling up again. There's massive amounts of cum all over Pink's pelvic region, the bed, and whatever parts of the slave are visible. It should look like his balls are laying in a thick puddle of it. Purple (off panel): "You never said I couldn't give him a little help!" Panel 42: View from behind Pink, looking back over her shoulder at Purple and the slave, as she slams down on his cock. She looks mad. Pink: "Damn you! I'll fuck him until his heart goes out if I have to!" Panel 43: Purple has changed position so her face is still looming over the slave's, but she's facing toward Pink now instead of away from her (which is to say she's kneeling on the bed behind his head instead of over his body). Another ejaculation sound can be heard. Despite being in the process of ejaculating the slave is looking anxiously at Purple, wondering what she means. Purple: "Don't worry, I'll make her share long before that happens. Now if you'd h me get this lipstick off..." Panel 44: Purple has her lips pressed tight against the slave's chest as her breasts cover his face. Panel 45: Purple dragging her lips along the slave's chest, leaving a thick smudge of it on him. Panel 46: Pink anxiously looking over her shoulder and grabbing onto the slave's legs, trying to brace herself to take a giant load of cum. The slave's balls look larger and excited (those tick marks you used around his penis on page 5 of the first chapter would be fine). Pink (thinking to herself): "Is she trying to make him shoot hard enough to push me off?" Panel 47: The slave is ejaculating again except with a giant load due to all the lipstick Purple has just left on his chest. Pink just barely manages to keep herself on him and the sheer force of the ejaculation going on inside her nearly makes her cum. Panel 48: Pink has started fucking the slave again and looks ecstatic as she thinks she's spoiled Purple's plan. Pink: "Ha! You almost had me with that one, Meri! But it looks like I'll be winning this after all!" ________________________________________________________________________________ Panel 49: Close up of Purple's lips as she finishes applying the glossy white lipstick she took out earlier. Purple: "What? I just didn't want to waste that lipstick before putting on a new color..." Panel 50: Purple is now face-to-face with Pink, who is looking in shock at the new lipstick. Pink: "Is that pleasure lipstick for succubi? You damn cheater!" Purple: "Hehe, you should have put some rules in place before making the bet..." Panel 51: Purple is passionately kissing Pink on the lips. Pink looks shocked from the sudden rush of pleasure but isn't having an orgasm just yet. Another ejaculation can be heard. Panel 52: Pink's drooling a bit and looks like she's being fucked silly as Purple starts licking semen off her pelvic region. Pink: "I-I won't..." Panel 53: Purple kisses Pink's clitoris, causing her to moan with pleasure. Panel 54: Frontal view of pink. The slave is thrusting up into Pink who looks to be at her limit. Purple is sitting next to her and looks pleased as she watches. Pink: "I won't c-c..." Panel 55: Pink is having an incredibly powerful orgasm. I don't particularly care what angle this is drawn from as long as it gets the point across. Purple used her lipstick dragging to draw a big kiss mark on the slave's chest, though, so please include that if his chest is visible in this panel. Pink: "CUUUUUUUM!" Panel 56: Side view of the slave and Pink, who has fallen backward onto him. Both are panting heavily and the slave has his head turned to the side so he's not just getting a mouth full of Pink's hair. Purple is kneeling beside them, facing the panel. She's feeling the slave's testicles with one hand and reapplying her purple lipstick with the other. She looks pleased. There's cum all over the bed still. Purple: "Well, I can still feel some juice in there, so it looks like you owe me those two liters!" Panel 57: Pink has gotten up, leaving the slave's chest visible and revealing the big kiss mark Purple drew on it earlier. She's looking at the drawing herself, just being able to see it now." Pink: "*Sigh* Yes, I know. I'll give it to you later. Cute, by the way." Purple: "Thanks!" Panel 58: The slave is looking toward his penis, alarmed as Purple (off panel) has started licking it. Purple (off panel): "Anyways, it's my turn now!" Panel 59: Slave's POV as Purple is happily licking some of the excess cum off his shaft. Pink is yelling at her. Pink: "Hey, I was the one who milked all that!" Panel 60: The slave throws his head back in anguish as the two lick his cock all over (all three are visible). Pink: "I have to say, despite you feeding him again earlier it's pretty amazing how thick this still is." Purple: "Yeah, I bet he's got another couple rounds of sex left in him yet..." Panel 61: Purple has mounted the slave in a cowgirl position again. Purple: "Isn't that right, slave?" Panel 62: Purple fucking the slave from whatever angle you like. Panel 63: A large load of cum being shot against a black background. Panel 64: The slave is fucking Pink doggy style. Panel 65: He's fucking Purple missionary style. Panel 66: His cock is between Pink's breasts as he cums on her face. Panel 67: Pink and Purple are on either side of the slave's cock. Purple was about to start sucking it, but Pink has jacked him off and aimed a particularly forceful, super soaker-esque load at her face, forcing her to turn away. She looks agitated and Pink is giggling. Panel 68: The stop watch like time from the beginning of the chapter is laying in a pool of semen. nearly 3 hours have passed, the slave has ejaculated 25 times and the girl orgasm counter shows 6. Multiple ejaculations can be heard coming from off the panel. Panel 69: Pink and Purple are both sliding their vaginas up and down the slave's shaft. A thin, but still impressive by human standards, cum shot has shot up between them, going at least as high as their breasts. Panel 70: The slave looks very exhausted. Several kissing sound effects are coming from off the panel, in whatever direction his cock and the girls would be. Slave: "Please..." Panel 71: The girls look displeased by the fact the fact that he's speaking. His penis can be seen throbbing between them and it's now covered in Pink and Purple kiss marks. Pink: "Please what? Stop!? Don't be ridiculous! I know you still have some cum left in there for us!" Purple: "Maybe he meant 'Please kiss me more' so he can get all those annoying thoughts out of his head..." Panel 72: Pink and Purple have their eyes closed and their lips puckered as they move in to kiss the slave's cock more. ________________________________________________________________________________ Panel 73: Both girls are interrupted as a wave of drowsiness comes over them. Purple: "Hey Lilith, are you suddenly..." Pink: "Yeah, what's going..." Panel 74: View from above as both girls have fallen asleep. That slave is still laying on his back in a state of disbelief.
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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Fri Jun 21, 2013 12:58 pm | |
| Chapter 4: - Spoiler:
Succubus Dungeon New Slave #4 Cover: Not sure yet
Panel 1: The slave is sitting up, looking at the sleeping girls. As in most of the last chapter the bed is absolutely drenched with, all three of them may as well be laying in puddles of it. Slave: "Is this what that pill was for? Ungh, why did it have to take so long? Well, I had better figure out something fast..." Panel 2: The slave is digging around in that purse Pink had at the beginning of the last chapter. Slave: "Are the cell keys in here?" Panel 3: The slave is holding a white napkin with pink hearts on it he found in the bag. Slave: "Damn, no keys, but I may be able to use this to clean off..." Panel 4: The slave's standing up now, no longer on the bed. His face, chest, and balls have been cleaned off and he's just finishing up wiping off his penis. He's looking down at something on the floor to his left. Panel 5: One of the girl's set of cell keys is just laying on the floor next to the bed. It has a large key ring with a heart on it exactly like the one on the slave's collar. The keys are all penis shaped. Slave (off panel): "Really?" Panel 6: The slave is holding the keys and shocked to find that both the heart on the key ring and the one around his neck are suddenly blinking and making beeping sounds. Slave: "Oh no, I should have known this charm had something to do with my collar! I need to get out of here now!" Panel 7. After having opened it, the slave is standing on the other side of the door to the room he was in for the last 2 chapters. He's looking around frantically. His collar and the keys (if you include them in the panel) are still blinking. Slave (thinking to himself): "I can't just leave my master, though! Or that guy who helped me out... Ah, there he is!" Panel 8: The other sperm slave (from chapter 2) is surprised to see the slave (doesn't have to be visible in the panel) outside of his cell. Slave: "Hey, do you know if there's any way to turn a squiggly back to normal!? I have to find my master!" Other Slave: "Y-yes, there is. I've seen it happen once before..." Panel 9: Red (topless) is at the other end of the corridor, talking into a heart-shaped communication device on her wrist. Red: "Blue, I think I've just found the culprit!" Panel 10: Having never seen a greater succubus before, the slave is especially shocked to see Red at the end of the hallway and drops the keys, but still has the napkin in his other hand. Panel 11: Red blows a magic kiss, similar to the one Pink used in the second chapter. Panel 12: The kiss projectile is making contact with the slave's penis, causing little hearts to fly to fly off with the impact. His penis is getting tense, as if he's about to cum, and an excessive amount of pre-cum is coming off the tip. Panel 13: The slave is frantically cleaning the kiss mark off his penis before it takes full effect. Panel 14: Red looks amused. Red: "Oh? Clever, are we?" Panel 15: Close up of Red's face as she blows more kisses. The panel shows her in one seductive kiss blowing pose, but several kiss projectiles are flying off her lips. Panel 16: The slave has one hand covering the head of his penis and is frantically waving the napkin around with the other to block the projectiles. Panel 17: As that continues Blue (also topless) teleports in behind him and looks amused by his struggle. Panel 18: The slave starts turning around to run, but hasn't taken his eyes off Red. He doesn't notice the Blue is right behind him. Panel 19: The slave has run face-first into Blue's cleavage and has become docile from being in there, standing still with only his hair sticking up above her breasts a bit and his penis poking out between her legs. Panel 20: Red and Blue are now standing bust-to-bust with the slave's head remaining in their cleavage. They're both looking down at him. Red: "Well, that was over quckly." Blue: "Hehe, glad I could help?" Panel 21: Close up of the slave's face, which is still buried in Blue's cleavage. He looks dazed and an aroma can be seen going past his nostrils. Slave (thinking to himself): "They're not forcing me to stay in here, and yet I... This odor... I have to get..." Panel 22: The slave looks more out-of-it than before. His eyes are closed, his mouth is hanging open, the pheromones can be seen swirling around him. Slave (thinking to himself): "I have to..." _____________________________________________________________________________ Panel 23: Similar to the last panel except the slave has started to drool a bit and the thought bubble he had before is now filled with tits. The edges of this panel are hazy and, instead of darkness or flesh (whatever you had around his head in the last two panels), the backdrop is a collage of hearts, kiss marks, and different colored puckered lips, reflecting his thoughts in the moment as the pheromones overwhelm him. Panel 24: The slave (in the exact same position as panel 19) is ejaculating with a large load that flies several meters forward (the length of it can just be assumed if a panel that wide wouldn't work). Red looks impressed by the shot. Red: "Wow, kid's got a nice shot!" Panel 25: Blue is holding the salve, who's now unconscious, in her left arm and has some of his semen between her fingers in her right hand, which she's looking at, examining its consistency and such. Blue: "Is this that guy Meri and Lilith were talking about?" Red (off panel): "I think so. Let's bring him back to their room and see what they want done with him." Panel 26: The slave is shackled to a wall similar to the cover of chapter 1. He looks a bit confused as he's just waking up. Purple (off panel): "You know, I'm impressed he was able to think about anything but sex." Pink (off panel): "No kidding, last time this happened the slave just fucked us in our sleep until he passed out..." Panel 27: Slave's POV. Pink is standing to his left and has a stern look on her face while Purple, standing to his right, has a large glass container of the semen she won from Pink and is merrily drinking from it with a straw. Both girls are clothed again. Pink: "Enjoy your nap? We certainly weren't expecting ours..." Panel 28: The bed they were all on chapter 3 can be seen along with at least one of the walls in the room (so maybe use a side or isometric view instead of an above one?). It's still absolutely drenched with cum, to the point where there's more of it visible than the bed sheets. Some cum can also be seen on the walls, implying they had him ejaculating all over the place. Pink (off panel): "Now, fortunately for us your seed was only mildly contaminated with a drug made for human targets, which is why we got to have so much fun before it kicked in. That still leaves all of this inedible, though, which is simply unacceptable! I was tempted to turn you into a squiggly, but decided to give you a second chance since you scored so well in our test earlier." Panel 29: The slave looks nervous as Pink, who's face is now within inches of his, looks him right in the eyes and puts her hand around the back of his head. Pink: "But, before that, I'd like to know where you got that drug from since you've never been in the lab." Slave: "I can't re..." Panel 30: Pink is kissing the slave on the slave on the lips. The slave looks shocked. Panel 31: Similar view to 29 except the slave looks dazed and has a kiss mark on his lips. Pink: "Tell me where you got the drug." Slave: "The man 2 cells down from my own gave it to me." Pink: "So that's why you were trying to free him... Meri, tell Red and Blue to pay that one a visit." Panel 32: The other slave is in his cell, partially laying on the floor, but with his back up against the wall as if he had stumbled backward and crawled back a bit afterward (basically I jsut don'w want him standing so the girls can look even taller in the next panel). He looks frightened. Red and Blue's shadows are looming over him. Red (off panel): "Meri just told us you've been a very bad boy..." Other slave: "What are you going to do to me?" Panel 33: Other slave's POV as Red and Blue (clothed now) loom over him. They're both grinning and look kind of playful. Blue: "Oh, just a little 'reeducation'." Panel 34: Holding him by his arm pits, Red is lifting the other slave up from behind, just high enough so his feet aren't touching the ground (his feet don't have to be in the panel, I just don't want her lifting him up very high) and bringing the back of his head in toward her breasts. Blue is standing in front of him, petting the head of his penis and looking at it. Blue: "Some extra attention to get you thinking with this head again instead of that naughty one up there..." Panel 35: The other slave's head has been placed between Red's breasts. Her bra is still on and the elastic straps of it are binding his wrists, keeping his hands in the cups of her bra with his palms against her flesh. Red is re-fastening her belt so it fits around both of them, fitting just above the other slave's penis and whatever part of her back that area would meet up with. The other slave's legs are sticking out straight with shock and his cock looks like it's about to explode. Red: "I'll give you a lift back to our chambers. Try not to make a mess!" Blue (off panel): "I just hope he doesn't dry up before we get there." Panel 36: The other slave is ejaculating as the girls (with Blue leading them) walk down the hallway (don't need to show any cells if you don't want to. it could be a bare stretch of wall or something.) Since Blue was walking ahead of Red and him, the cum shot's hitting her back. Blue looks annoyed and red is amused. Panel 37: Back in Pink and Purple's room. Pink is showing a syringe to the slave (he's still bound). Pink doesn't have to be on panel aside from her hand holding the syringe. Pink: "Now, I could inject you with this antidote to nullify the drug and start our feeding session over, but would you really learn anything from that?" Panel 38: Pink it taking the cap off a tube of black lipstick. Pink: "I doubt it. I said I'd give you another chance, but you have to prove you're worth it first..." Panel 39: Pink is applying the black lipstick and Purple, taking a momentary break from her cum drinking, looks shocked to see her doing so. Purple: "You're not going to use that on him, are you!?" Panel 40: Pink is holding the slave's shaft up as she kisses one of his testicles. Panel 41: A view of the slave from the chest up. Pounding sound effects indicate his heart is going nuts and he looks very tense/shocked, beyond any sensation from a kiss he's gotten yet. Kissing sound effects are coming from the bottom of the panel. Panel 42: The slave's cock and balls are now covered with black kiss marks. His balls are expanding and his penis has gotten larger and veiny. So much pre-cum is coming off of it that it's running down his shaft and balls and is dripping off of him. Pink (off panel): "I've just given you an older, much stronger version of our typical lipstick." Panel 43: A black, generic male silhouette with a white penis. Red arrows from every end of its body are all converging on the penis. This panel just serves as a really simple of diagram of what Pink's saying, implying that every bit of vitality he has is being forced into his penis. Pink (off panel): " Unlike what we've given you so far, which simply encourages your body to turn excess nutrients into semen, this one is already putting absolutely everything you have into it." Panel 44: Flashback sequence of a succubus on a skeleton in the cowgirl position in a big puddle of semen. Pink (off panel): "This lipstick gave us our reputation as killers..." Panel 45: Pink is strapping a mouthpiece onto the slave with a tube in it to give him food. Pink: "You might not die, though, if you remain focused and keep eating." Panel 46: A black metal tube with a pair of silicone lips on end (kind of like a fleshlight) is being slid onto the slave's penis. This device also has a tube coming off the other end of it. Pink: "This is going to make you come over, and over, and over again until all the drugged fluids in your body right now are sucked out through your dick hole. so you'll never forget a single drop of what you've wasted here today." ________________________________________________________________________________ Panel 47: A zoomed out view of the slave with his mouth and milking apparatus on. In this panel we can see that the mouth piece leads to a big glass container of that pink fluid from before while the milking one leads to an empty container waiting to be filled with cum. Both containers are a bit larger than the slave himself. Pink (off panel): "As I said, though, you might survive if you replenish off that food, but only if you hold off on ejaculating long enough to digest any of it." Panel 48: Purple is still sucking away at her cum straw, but seems a bit concerned as she looks at the slave (off panel). Whichever hand isn't holding the container of semen is casting a spell which has just teleported the giant squiggly (clean this time) into the room and Pink is approaching it. Pink: "And since I'm still hungry I'll give you something to aspire to!" Panel 50: The other slave is suspended in the center of Red and Blue's room by chains, being held up in an X shaped. Red is in front of him and Blue is behind him and they're both rubbing their breasts up and down is body. The slave looks completely out of it and there's cum all over his body and the girl's breasts, suggesting that they just keep rubbing him as he cums on them. Panel 51: Back in Pink and Purple's room the slave can be seen desperately feeding off his mouth tube as semen gets shot through the one leading off his penis. Several ejaculation noises and a sucking sound are coming off it. Panel 52: Pink (with her regular lipstick on again) has wrapped herself around the giant squiggly and is kissing its head. It has several pink kissmarks there already and is trembling a little as it gets excited. Ejaculation noises are coming from the slave's location. Panel 53: The other slave is now covered with red and blue kissmarks as they give him double paizuri. He's starting to look dried up, but has a glowing expression on his face as he loses his awareness on account of the pheromones. All 3 characters have cum all over them. Panel 55: Purple is now kissing the giant squiggly as Pink (who's now taken off her top and panies) rubs her whole body up and down its shaft. Along with the head, its shaft and balls are now covered with pink and purple kiss marks as well. It looks like it's close to ejaculating. Panel 56: The slave tilts his head up and closes his eyes as he has yet another orgasm. Panel 57: The giant squiggly is erupting with an ejaculation exponentially larger the slave has done so far and with the force of a fire hose. Pink and Purple are on either side of it, holding their mouths open as some of that cum starts to rain down on them. Panel 58: Red and Blue are standing on either side of the other slave, who looks dried up, but still has an expression of ignorant bliss/retardation on his face. There are thick lines of cum running from one girls breasts to the other and they both looks pleased. Red: "Heh, I bet he'll behave now!"
Panel 60: The slave has passed out and the machines have stopped. His food container is completely empty and his cum one is full. There are bits of cum everywhere from the giant squiggly's ejaculation still, some on the slave as well.
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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Fri Jun 21, 2013 1:00 pm | |
| About half of Chapter 5: - Spoiler:
Succubus Dungeon New Slave #5 Cover: Not sure yet Panel 1: The slave is unconscious, but rock hard, and bound to a hospital bed with pink sheets. His head is resting on a heart-shaped pillow. He has an IV going into one of his arms and one on each testicle, all of which have the familiar pink fluid going through their tubes. The succubus nurse is measuring the length of his penis. Nurse: "Well, length and girth seem normal..." Panel 2: The nurse has wrapped a blood pressure checker around the slave's shaft and is squeezing the rubber bulb that pumps air into it. It's gotten quite tight. Nurse: "Let's see about that blood pressure..." Panel 3: The slave is rudely awoken by the sensation of having his cock squeezed so tightly. Nurse (off panel): "Also normal!" Panel 4: The nurse has a syringe in one hand, full of a small amount of blue liquid, and is holding the slave's balls up with her other hand. She's looking toward the slave's face, having just noticed he's up. Nurse: "Ah, I see you're finally up! You've been out for nearly 2 weeks now. You should be proud to know, though, that this guy perked back up almost immediately after you were brought in." Panel 5: A male urine bottle (the kind with the tilted head so you can use it while laying down) half full of semen is sitting on the nurse's supply table. Some of her lipstick can be seen on the rim of it, suggesting that she's been drinking it. Nurse: "And with all these nocturnal emissions you've been having, it's like you were never out of service!" Panel 6: The nurse is injecting that blue liquid into the slave's perineum (aka gooch, or that area between the testes and anus). However you want to show this is up to you. Nurse: "Now, don't be alarmed, I'm going to make you go flaccid for a bit..." Panel 7: The nurse is doing a really sexy pose. Nurse: "Now look at me." Panel 8: The slave's penis is becoming erect again. It should look maybe 50-70% of its typical erect state. Nurse: "Great! Just had to be sure you could still do it naturally." Panel 9: The nurse has just blown a magic kiss at the slave's penis, which has connected, causing his dick to spring back to 100% in an instant. Nurse: "Alright, enough of that." Panel 10: Pink and Purple enter the medical room. Purple is looking toward the doctor while Pink is excitedly looking toward the slave (neither the slave or the nurse have to be visible.) Purple: "Hello doctor!" Pink: "Hey Meri, look, he's up!" ________________________________________________________________________________ Panel 11: Pink and Purple are looking at the slave's penis, which now has some pre-cum at its tip. They look eager to feed off it again since they've had nothing but squiggly cum for the past two weeks. Nurse: "Heh, looks like you really missed him. He just woke up a little while ago, actually, and seems like he's fit for service again." Panel 12: The Nurse is talking to Pink and Purple, both of whom are now giving her their attention as opposed to the slave's penis. Nurse: "You know, this slave of yours has some really high grade stuff building up in there, and the competition's coming up soon..." Panel 13: Pink is looking back in the direction of the slave. Pink: "You think he's breeder material?" Nurse (off panel): "He's got a better shot than any of the other ones I've tested recently." Panel 14: Purple is talking to Pink. Purple: "You know our access to him would be limited if he won, though. Not to mention what could happen if he lost..." Pink: "I know... I'm not about to turn up a potential favor from the queen, though." Purple: "You do have a point." Panel 15: Pink and Purple are on either side of the slave, holding him up with their shoulders (since he hasn't walked in quite awhile). He now has a Pink kiss mark on one cheek and a Purple one on the other. Both: "Thanks Doc!" Nurse: "No problem, girls. Just go a bit easier on him next time, alright?" Panel 16: Purple is nude, laying on her back, and Pink (also nude) is laying on top of her. Their breasts are pressed together and the slave can be seen behind them, currently fucking Pink (the idea being that he's just switching from one vagina to another). He has a few kiss marks on whatever parts of him are visible. Slave (thinking to himself/exposition): "That night the girls nearly fucked me to death again..." Panel 17: Pink and Purple are giving the slave double paizuri and he's ejaculating. Both the girls look like they're arguing with each other all the while. Slave (thinking to himself/exposition): "All the while debating whether or not I should be entered in something called 'the competition', which they wouldn't explain, of course, as I had no say in the matter." Panel 18: Pink, Purple, and the slave are standing in front of a large pair of doors. They have a pair of giant stone penises on them (similar to the door in the first chapter), which are crossed, as if they're swords about to duel. Slave (thinking to himself/exposition): "I'm guessing Lilith won the argument since they took me to a new, deeper part of the dungeon afterward..." Panel 19: The slave is looking nervously at the door. Pink and Purple are talking to him, indifferent to his anxiety. Purple: "I'm afraid this is good bye for now." Pink: "We're leaving you with a new trainer, one who can make a real champ out of you." Panel 20: Pink and Purple are kissing the slave on the cheeks. Panel 21: The girls look back and wave as they walk off. Purple: "We'll be back for you in 3 months." Pink: "And I want you back in one piece when that day comes, alright!?" Panel 22: The slave (who has the kiss marks on his cheeks, if they're visible) looks frightened as the door starts to open. Panel 23: The trainer is looking at the slave's cock and looks neither disappointed or impressed, she's simply sizing him up. Trainer: "I take it you're Lilith and Meri's slave. Come with me..." Panel 24: The slave is following his trainer. Various restraints and bondadge geat can be seen in the background. Trainer: "Did your owners tell you why you're here?" Slave: "Something about a competition?"
And stuff I have yet to write out: - The trainer explains the competition and what it takes to win. She also makes it clear that he could die if he fails, giving him incentive to win since fathering a generation of succubi doesn't appeal to the slave in its own right. Training (all of these sequences are brief as the slave recalls them): - Trainer tasks him with staying hard for a long time with no pheromones, kisses, drugged food, masturbation, etc. lest he be turned into a squiggly. He has a cock ring that release the squiggly gas if it doesn't detect a certain amount of pressure being exerted on its interior and his wrists are fitted with devices that will set the ring off if they come close to it, meaning he can't touch himself. Despite the lack of stimuli he's also expected to fill a bucket of cum every day. - The slave learns how to make himself ejaculate with convulsions and strong mental focus and manages to fill his subconscious with so much eroticism that he'll maintain an erection while sleeping. - ^ During all this time the slave only ever sees the trainer when she comes to take the cum bucket in exchange for food (she won't feed him unless the bucket is full) since seeing her anym ore regularly would make it easier for him to stay hard, compromising the test. - After he has proven himself able to hold an erection indefinitely and cum on command, much more intensive training starts. The slave is seen shooting targets and being taught to more thoroughly control the size of his loads. He is also seen performing incredible acts of strength with his penis, such as jumping with it, like a pogo stick, while the trainer sits on his back (might make a good cover?). - Whenever the slave isn't training he's bound to an apparatus that jelqs him (a penis exercise I'll give a reference for later). - Finally the trainer is seen telling the slave that his training is complete after he's able to satisfy her in bed without passing out or going dry. - The chapter ends with the slave standing over Pink and Purple, who are passed out in a big pool of his cum, as he checks that stopwatch ting from before, noting his dramatically improved virility. Chapter 6 Cover: Not sure yet - The next chapter opens with Pink and Purple bringing the slave to the competition (I still haven't thought of a good name for this yet) and telling him that it started a little while ago, with every man failing so far. - At the gates to the first room of the trials the slave meets the queen for the first time. She tells him a bit more about the competition and then makes him drink some of her vaginal fluids, giving him even more erotic energy. There are 4 trials he has to complete: Trial 1: The slave simply has to reach the door at the end of the room. He isn't told this, however, until after he has inserted himself in the first succubi and finds that he can't pull out due to a great suction force. The slave concludes that he has to cum in her with a load massive enough to force her vagina open, and eventually does so Trial 2: Red and Blue are in the next room and the slave is tasked with making them both cum. The twist, though, is that he's bound by their elastic bra straps and can barely move (I'll give detailed references as to how he's bound later). He manages to get semen on both their breasts, though, and rubs it in with what few parts of his body he can move, causing them to cum from his cum's topical effects, as seen in chapter 2, which has only gotten stronger now. Trial 3: The next room has a massive harem of succubi who swarm the slave. He's expected to make all of them cum, but things are seeming bleak as the chapter ends with him buried under a pile of them. Chapter 7 Cover: Not sure yet - The chapter opens with a greater succubi and some of her assistants capturing an entire village full of men. The men are initially standing in a crowd, naked, erect, and compliant (due to pheromones) as the succubus explains their new role in life. Their wives, daughters, etc. have all been drugged and are fast asleep. - She then has the men form lines based on their penis sizes, the least of which are being turned into squigglies as the others walk single-file into one of a couple of large cages (on wagons or something). - While that is happening an angelic woman appears and tells the succubi that they've gone too far this time. Meanwhile, back in the dungeon, the slave is still undergoing the third trial. It seems like he's taken a bit more control of the situation, but is still a bit desperate and is starting to get exhausted. He does eventually prevail, though, and is pleased to find a rang to clean himself (the succubi in the last room kissed him a lot) and some of that pink fluid to help regain some strength. - ^ At some point during this trial Pink and Purple can be seen watching from the audience and sucking off some squigglies as a snack. Trial 4: The last room merely contains the queen sitting on her throne. The slave has to make it to the end of the room and simply touch her, but this proves difficult as the queen's incredibly powerful pheromones and blown kisses make it difficult to move or do much of anything without having massive orgasms. By the end he barely manages to crawl over to her and touch her foot, but it counts. - The queen applies a glossy golden lipstick and kisses the head of the slave's penis with it. This lipstick permanently "supercharges" the slave with erotic energy, making his penis grow a bit, his testicles expand more as his sperm cells become larger, and making him much more virile all around. The queen asks him to fuck her right there and he's now able to despite having no energy left before. - That angel appears in the dungeon and says she's banishing all of them back to their own dimension. Red and Blue attack her but she's able to effortlessly immobilize them and cast them into a portal. She then sends out a magic wave that turns all the squigglies back into humans, including the hero, who Pink was coincidentally sucking on. - Knowing that the angel is far too powerful for any of them, the queen tells her succubi to retreat and they all go back to their own dimension. Pink and Purple seem determined to find their way back to the human world again one day, though, and have the slave to themselves (not knowing where he'll end up). - As the slaves and former squigglies are all trying to find clothes and leave the dungeon the angel notices the golden kissmark on the slave and takes note of his "assets." She asks him if he'd like to join her in their world and he finds himself unable to refuse as he's completely infatuated with her. - The hero wonders how much of a choice his former apprentice really had in the matter and the comic ends with the slave ejaculating on a bunch of angels as the one from before explains that their magical abilities are also cum-based, but they don't have to live off it like the succubi. The slave notices that not a whole lot has changed, but the angles are much gentler with him. | |
| | | handsomered
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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Fri Jun 21, 2013 1:03 pm | |
| Looks like the forum messed up some formatting, but I think it's all still readable? I just feel weird about throwing the word file up somewhere before it's all finished. | |
| | | monked80
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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Fri Jun 21, 2013 7:02 pm | |
| sounds incredible. and it reads fine for me | |
| | | Zesquid
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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Fri Jun 21, 2013 9:31 pm | |
| Yeah the pics all disappeared | |
| | | handsomered
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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Sat Jun 22, 2013 8:21 pm | |
| I actually didn't include the reference images in any of these posts. I guess I can upload them here later, though. | |
| | | Zesquid
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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Sat Jun 22, 2013 9:44 pm | |
| That would be much appreciated | |
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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Sun Jul 07, 2013 12:53 pm | |
| great stuff thanks for posting | |
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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Fri Aug 02, 2013 8:46 am | |
| Revised version of page 10 | |
| | | DarkWizard
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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Mon Aug 05, 2013 10:11 pm | |
| How is the progress of that black and white comic going,by the way? | |
| | | handsomered
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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Mon Aug 05, 2013 10:21 pm | |
| IDK, it's taking forever. I wish I could cancel that one. | |
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| | | wolfzero001
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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Sun Sep 15, 2013 12:24 pm | |
| Dang, that is um... one hell of a wake up call. @w@ lol | |
| | | monked80
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| Subject: Re: Comic Commissions of Mine Sun Sep 15, 2013 2:51 pm | |
| awesome,great to see more of this | |
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