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PostSubject: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Mon Mar 03, 2014 3:34 pm

You wake up in a cold, empty room with a single tv on the wall, still groggy from whatever made you unconscious, your eyes focus on the screen. Suddenly it flashes on, a beautiful girl stands in front of a wall similar to the walls of your apparent prison, she begins to speak in a soft purr. "Hello there, I hope you slept well. As it stands you have no idea who I am, my name is Lilly, and I brought you here so we could play a little game. When this recording ends, the door behind you will open up into a huge maze, simply find your way to the exit at the center and you can leave." She steps aside revealing a bird's eye view picture of a gigantic convoluted labyrinth pinned to the wall behind her, she waits a couple of seconds before carrying on talking "However the maze its being patrolled by my beautiful friends, it is their job to return you to your cell, I'll let you find out their individual methods of doing this, but rest assured you will most certainly find them enjoyable I myself am also in the maze waiting for you, and if you are returned to your cell, the game restarts. After a few restarts you may find yourself looking for us rather than the center" she laughs musically and the tv suddenly shuts off. You hear a creaking noise behind you and you turn to see a pair of thick wooden doors swinging open revealing a long corridor. You think back to what lily was saying "you may find yourself looking for us instead of an exit" you realise that the "girls" must be the enchanting midara, or their monster girl kin, both races of highly magical temptresses who use their looks to ensnare men. However there wasn't another way into the room so you step into the labyrinth.

As you walk through the twisting halls of the labyrinth, you see nothing of the girls searching for you, you don't even hear any footsteps, eventually you take what must have been a wrong turn and end up at a dead end, frustrated you turn around only to find a gorgeous brunette walking towards you, she's got you cornered.

You take in her figure, about a head shorter than you, slim, with a breathtakingly pretty face, nothing inhuman so she must be a midara,.you barely finish taking her in when suddenly she's reached you, she runs her delicate fingers along your chest and starts to speak in a wonderfully sultry voice "hey there honey, aren't you a cutie" she giggles, "my name's Immy and soon we're gonna be in love" as she says this she leans up and brushes her velvet lips against your chin before slowly wrapping her arms around you and hugging you sweetly, her breasts pushed firmly into your chest. You stand stunned for a second before pushing her away, she merely laughs at this resistance and purrs "oh good, it's always more fun when they resist..." as she finishes speaking she brings her hand to her lips and kisses it gently, you can here the sound of her lips against her soft skin, before blowing you a kiss. Nothing physical comes from her hand but in an instant you feel a warm fuzziness in your chest, she smiles lovingly at you before walking around you, stroking your chest as she goes, before going up on tip toes to start tenderly kissing your neck. A wide smile crosses your face as you hear more sultry words drift into you're ears "now honey, I'm gonna walk back around you, and we're gonna share our true loves first kiss okay cutie?" She punctuates every word with another kiss before finishing the sentence with a soft, long love bite. Immy walks back around you and takes your head in her hands before pulling you towards her so that your lips meet, she kisses you softly, within seconds your eagerly kissing her back while letting her warm tongue explore every inch of your mouth. After what feels like no where near long enough she pulls away and smiles coyly at you "can you do one little thing for me pet?" You nod instantly, happy to oblige Immy's wishes "I want you to lie down for me" you do so unquestioningly, lying flat on your back and Immy crouches down and leans over you, with her hands on either side of your head. "I just know that it won't be long until you're completely mine sweetie" she coos before leaning down and kissing you on the forehead, you start to feel incredibly relaxed as Immy starts to lick and kiss every inch of your face, each kiss making you more so relaxed, as she finally brings her lips to yours once more, your eyes close, bringing a sleep filled with dreams of the midara.

Part 2

You wake up feeling groggy, you lie still as you slowly come to. You slowly get to your feet and venture back into the labyrinth. You wander through the halls for what seems like forever before you come to a large wooden door, tentatively you push it open and step inside.

The room was mostly bare, save for a few cushions lying on the soft carpeted floor and the mirror that lined the wall opposite you. Lying in the middle of the cushions was a stunning girl with long brown hair, deep, beautiful brown eyes, rosy cheeks, rosier lips and a enticingly busty figure, as soon as she notices you she breaks into a dazzling smile, and slowly, gracefully brings herself to her feet. You know you should run, you know you should get as far away from this girl as possible, but then she speaks "Hey there sweetie" her voice sweet as honey, "
you hesitate but begin to turn to leave... "Where you going baby?" There's a genuine concern in her voice that forces you to turn back to her, she smiles endearingly at you and blows you a quick kiss, making a soft smooching sound against her hand, you just begin to wander exactly what a kiss like that would feel like when she shoots you a coy wink "come to mama baby..." She was hard to resist just by looking at her, but the wink, the kiss and her loving, soothing voice were too much. You tentatively take a few slow steps towards her and the soothing voice continues "Gooood" she purrs, while you approach she casually unzips her corset slightly, revealing her luscious breasts just enough to quell any thoughts of running "Mmmm they're nice aren't they babe" She opens her arms for a hug as you take your last steps to her, how can staying away from someone this stunning be a good idea, she once again flashes you a winning smile before slowly taking you in her arms. Her touch is so gentle, you in instantly feel completely relaxed as she slowly kisses you on the cheek, as her beautiful lips leave your skin, she begins to slowly lower you and herself to the ground "Cooome on..." she coos oncr more, "You know I'll make you happy" Why would she lie, no one this beautiful, with such a sweet kiss would ever lie to you, you sit down with her, but she moved you so that you're lying across her with your head relaxed on one of her hands. Once again you find yourself staring at her glorious chest. "Wanna touch them?" She asks "Go on... I don't mind" still fully relaxed you bring one hand up and feel her perfect breasts... so soft... so amazing... She smiles at what must be the look of complete ecstacy on your face and once more you hear her sweet voice "Would it be okay if I gave you a real kiss baby?" Too entranced to speak you nod enthusiastically and she sits you up facing her, she leans in slowly, all the while keeping that gorgeous smile, she slowly closes her beautiful eyes and your lips meet, after a while she smoothly slips her tongue into your mouth and as it dances around your own, and explores every corner of your mouth, you feel more and more relaxed until she finally pulls away. She slowly opens her eyes and looks at you adoringly, "You tired honey?" She asks "Rest with me" as she effortlessly uses one hand to rest your head on her soft, lovely chest...
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Mon Mar 03, 2014 3:35 pm

Remembered I'd wrote this ages ago, I'll write more if there's demand
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Mon Mar 03, 2014 5:48 pm

Does she really love him? or is it all a scheme? o3o
If it's a love story you can make work then by all means make more! =3
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Tue Mar 04, 2014 6:04 pm

finally we got a new story plz continue Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Wed Mar 05, 2014 12:31 pm

Please write more!
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Sun Mar 09, 2014 1:59 pm

do we have enough likes for a sequel?
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Sun Mar 09, 2014 4:52 pm

I wouldn't mind more of this.
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Mon Mar 10, 2014 7:25 pm

Moar onegai, you write the best stuff.
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Sun Mar 16, 2014 5:08 am

You wake up once more back in the room you started in, slowly rising to your feet you see the screen on the wall flicker to life revealing Lilly smiling at you "Having fun sweetie? You seemed to really enjoy that last one there, didn't you" she giggles "Don't go picking favourites yet honey, there's many more of us who haven't even had a chance with you yet, anyway, good luck" she blows a kiss to the screen and it turns off once more. You turn to the door and prepare once again to venture into the labyrinth.

Almost as soon as you step foot from the threshold you feel someone kiss you on the cheek, you take a step back into the room as a girl who must have been hiding behind the door you opened follows you inside. She's breathtaking, possibly the best looking girl you've come across in this place so far, she has waist long blonde hair, large, stunning blue eyes, full set inviting lips, and a near perfect figure. "Ooh, nowhere to run sweetie, so I guess you have two choices, be a good, boring little boy and surrender, or fight." Picking up on the challenge she's issued you, you get into a fighting stance. A smile flickers across her lips, "Good" she purrs before taking a stance of her own. You throw a straight punch, stepping in to close the distance, she steps in as well, expertly ducking under your punch and as you realise what just happened, she kisses you once more on the cheek, exactly where she'd kissed you before. You hesitate at the feeling of her soft, warm lips, giving her an opportunity to push you up against the wall of your prison, she rubs herself against you while moaning intensely, her breasts feel so amazing against your chest that you don't even attempt to push her off of you, allowing her to grind against you once more and this time as she does, she licks the length of your face and neck. This time you do manage to react, and you duck around her back into the room. "Ooh... I love it when they have fight in them" you throw another punch and as you do she simply blows you a kiss while taking a step backwards, this throws you off and your punch lands a good threr inches short of target "Oh, so charming" she says softly as she reaches out and takes your hand, kissing it softly sending shivers down your spine before raising it above her and twirling under it, once again bringing her straight to you, "Well then, let's dance my prince" she moves your hands to get waist and places her arms gently around your neck before giving you a soft kiss, biting your bottom lip slightly and beginning to lead you around the room. As the two of you dance, you find yourself staring into her beautiful blue eyes, you want to just get lost in them forever. That's exactly what's happening, you need to do something, with all your remaining will you duck down in an attempt throw an uppercut. The girl catches it effortlessly and tuts "honestly that's just hurtful my prince, why would you ever want to do that" an unnatural surge of regret ruins through you and you let out a soft "sorry" she merely smiles down at you, still holding your hand, "oh it's fine my love, anyway look at what height your at now" she coos before letting your hand drop, putting both of hers on your shoulders and gently leading your head in between her soft, warm breasts, she let's you stay there for a while as you drop to your knees, enraptured by her. After a while she let's you go and kneels down in front of you "A kiss, my prince, before the end of the night?" She offers as you lean in and your lips meet, your vision filling with a warm pink light before your consciousness fades
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Wed Mar 19, 2014 10:24 am

Very awesome, though it could use some descriptors of appearance and more variation in the monster girls' gimmicks. You have a gift for(despite grammar, paragraphing and word variation being subpar) writing dialogue that doesn't verge into excessive domination, but focuses on a struggle into sweet surrender in exactly the right manner.

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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Sat Mar 22, 2014 7:47 pm

this was a great chapter
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Sun Mar 30, 2014 6:57 pm

are u gonna add anymore?
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Thu Apr 17, 2014 2:04 am

Sorry if this is too similar to the last entry. I wanted to experiment more with the idea of a girl who fights in a slightly more traditional sense as part of her seductions

You wake up once more, it takes a couple of minutes to clear your thoughts of the sweet, lustful dreams you'd been having for who knows how long. You get to your feet, wondering if you'll ever get out of this place and leave the chamber.

You manage to make what seems like good progress in the labyrinth this time, at least you've been walking for maybe an hour uninterrupted, when you come to a set of ornate double doors. You sigh, knowing almost for certain that there'll be a temptress on the other side, but this was the only path besides a dead end for a long while so you gingerly open them up and step inside. You are in a room similar to your starting cell, but the word checkpoint is crudely painted on the door opposite, you must have been making some progress after all. As you walk further into the room the doors behind you slam shut, and you can hear a bolt being slid across a locking mechanism followed by a girlish giggle.

With seemingly no other choice you open the door opposite you and enter a room that bears a striking resemblance to a martial arts dojo, standing in the middle is the blonde girl who so easily brought you to submission last time. She smiles at you " Well hello again sweetie, aren't I lucky? My little prince not only coming back, but reaching a checkpoint so close to me..." She licks her lips "Do you wanna submit now? Or do you still have enough fight in you for another little match?" Once again you're alone with this seductress and no way to avoid her so you get into a fighting stance once more, hoping that now you know her counter based style, you'll have a chance.

"Good..." She purrs as she approaches you "I was hoping to have some more fun with you before you're mine" she stops a few feet away from you and gets into a stance of her own. A few seconds pass with her obviously waiting for you to attempt another punch, she laughs musically before throwing a kick of her own, you manage to catch it, but before you can follow up on this advantage she throws her other leg into the air and around your neck, at the same time the leg your holding flies from your hand and also finds itself wrapped around you. You fall backwards and find your face an inch or so from her crotch, she laughs slightly as you strain yourself to stand up, she adjusts herself, pressing her sweet smelling groin to your face for just long enough for the scent to sink in, giving you a "tent" in your pants, before standing up and backing up a couple steps. As soon as your back in stance she steps in, arm winding back for a punch, you duck out of the way, so does she as she follows to on the dummy by quickly bringing her soft lips to yours, a sweet pleasure instantly coursing through your body. the kiss is only quick but it's enough to distract you while she follows up by grabbing your arm, darting behind you and quickly twisting it up behind your back, a sharp pain wracks for body before you shudder at something else. Your opponent is softly kissing the back of your neck, her lips making sure to grace every inch of your flesh, you let out a soft moan, to which she rewards you with a tender love bite. She moves to your left and whispers "We both know this is too good to resist my prince" into your ear before tenderly licking and sucking on your ear lobe. After a few minutes of her whispering sweet nothings and kissing everywhere she could she releases you and laughs "one more round honey" but you realise she must know you're too turned on and enraptured to focus as this time she merely walks up to you, her arms loosely around your neck and begins to kiss you, first on each cheek, the sides of her lips slightly overlapping the edges of yours before she asks "shall we?" And leaning in as you meet her half way, as the two of you passionately kiss, you once again feel your consciousness succumbing to pleasure and as your mind fades you hear "Next time it's the third date and we both know what that means..."
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Thu Apr 17, 2014 8:25 am

Nah, continuity is good, and it's different enough to not make it all seem too samey. There's no chance for the hero to become slowly enamoured if he only ever encounters different girls. It's also swell that the action is escalating while the kissing still continues-too much writing neglects kissing once the clothes are off.
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Thu Apr 17, 2014 7:17 pm

I dig it; this recent update was done well. Keep up the great work! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Sun May 25, 2014 11:35 pm

Please continue this series. The stories are fantastic and I'd love to see more of the maze and midara
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Thu May 29, 2014 1:26 pm

Don't worry I intend to, hopefully can start writing tomorrow
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Thu May 29, 2014 10:59 pm

Thanks anon64! I don't mind waiting for it though; just take your time to make the stories as good as they are Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Sun Jul 13, 2014 7:40 am

Random idea that popped into my head: you could have the next match against the blonde be a tag team wrestling competition with Immy and the corset girl being her partners. Of course, it's your story, so feel free to disregard, but perhaps it can serve as an inspiration.
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Sun Jul 13, 2014 8:35 am

I think that'd be an awesome idea for this story. Hopefully anon uses it or at least is inspired by it. I'd love to see this topic up and running again
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Sun Jul 13, 2014 9:33 am

(Caustic that is an amazing idea, but I just realised I have a part of this already written that I haven't uploaded, so I'll upload that and then get to work on your idea)

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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Mon Jul 28, 2014 3:31 am

(I've started work on your idea caustic, and here's the piece I'd already written anyway)


You wake up once more, noticing that you're still quite horny from your last "fight", this could be a problem as you have no choice but to face her again. Tentatively you open the door to her room, but find it empty. Relieved at your apparent strome of luck you waste no time in crossing to the door on the other side of the room and exit back into the maze. You explore this new section and get remarkably far without hitting one dead end, however as take a left down a fork in the path, you come across your next "opponent"

Standing directly in front of you, arms folded is a beautiful girl in a bejewelled pink showgirl outfit, with short straight matching pink hair. She smiles at your presence, causally kissing her hand and blowing it to you. Surprisingly you feel relatively unaffected by the kiss, from your past experience you would have expected to feel at least something. She struts slowly towards you and speaks softly "greetings, Mon Cherie" she has a vague French accent, as you watch her perfectly toned legs making their way towards you you feel your heart start to race. You back off slightly but as you do you make eye contact with her. She winks at you and audibly kisses the air, you start to back off far more slowly, this girl is just so sexy. She closes the gap between you very quickly, lifting her leg up in an incredible display of flexibility and rests it on your shoulder. The feeling of the silky netting that coats her legs is so unexpectedly pleasant that you stop attempting to back away. She smiles enticingly at you and brings one of her fingers to her lips, she slowly sucks on it, moaning passionately before running it slowly down you're chest "S├ęduisante, am I not" You're not quite sure what she said but the feeling of her hand reaching and caressing your groin has you nodding almost pathetically. " Magnifique" she purrs as she continues to caress your most sensitive parts. This isn't right, something in the back of your mind reminds you, you need to escape. It feels like the opposite of what you want to do, but you pull her leg off you and back quickly away from her. The girl giggles and brings her hand once more to her lips, she kisses it with much more intent this time, and blows a stream if pink vapour towards you. As you're body is engulfed in a sea of pink, you feel an odd heat in your groin and on your face, and a matching numbness on your limbs. You can't move them. The girl approaches you once more and brings her leg up to wrap around your waist. "Shhh" she purrs, stroking your cheek with her heavenly touch "Just relax Mon Cherie, relax and enjoy" she slowly leans in for a kiss, your lips meet hers as she softly sucks on your bottom lip, she pulls away far too quickly, but begins to tenderly lick and kiss your neck, each kiss is punctuated by your enraptured moans, after God knows how long of ecstasy, she kisses you deeply, her tongue artfully dancing with your own, spreading that numb warmth all through out your body, pink begins to cloud your vision and you blissfully slip out of consciousness.
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Mon Jul 28, 2014 10:01 am

Awesomely hot, it's especially cool that you made the French grammatically correct.
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Mon Jul 28, 2014 3:40 pm

I did!?, I'm honestly surprised as I have a very small knowledge of the language

Thanks caustic
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PostSubject: Re: inspired by anonywriter and shakewell   Mon Jul 28, 2014 5:00 pm

Agreed with caustic. It was very well written. Looking forward to any and all story posts here Very Happy
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