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 What Shall Kensei's fate be?

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Gaara (The Highest Zero)



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PostSubject: What Shall Kensei's fate be?   Mon Jun 04, 2012 4:19 pm

*If you haven't read part 1 you should before you read this you'd be so confused.
http://uponherlips.forumotion.com/t636-my-first-time-at-this

Kaijin's three followers had finally made it back to the hideout. Upon they're entrance they didn't see their master so they assumed he was deeper into the hideout. Behind a sitting cushion there was a tatami mat. One of the three followers removed the tatami mat and there was a hidden door. He opened it and held it open so his partners may enter first. They entered he soon followed after concealing the hidden door again. They entered a chamber where they saw lower ranked followers of Kaijin training. Some approached them from the rear. "Why have you returned so soon?" It was Kaijin in a unhappy mood. "Kaijin sensei... Kensei feel faster then we thought. We arrived upon him receiving a kiss from her but the amount of kisses or which kisses he had received is unknown to us." His anger grew to unknown heights followed by his face turning extremely red. "DAMN YOU SHEVA!!!!!!" He cry out extremely loud. His cry caused a shock wave knocking back all of his followers including the unconscious Kensei. He hit his head causing him to wake up. He looked up and and saw all these people surrounding him. "Where am I? Who are you people?" he asked in a panic. "Kensei it is me, Kaijin.... your father...." he responded almost saddened. "Father? I have no idea who you are.... Where is my mistress? Where is my love?" "I'm here..." a voice came from the underground hideout entrance. "SHEVA!" Kensei stood up and tried to run to her. Kaijin grabbed him by the collar of his shirt and kept him tight in his arm. "Let me go! LET ME GO!!" Kensei kicked back and forward struggling to get free. "Don't you worry love, me and you have unfinished business so I will get back to you." she chuckled. "Sheva, how the hell did you find my hideout?" Kaijin said. "Well my love gave me the information need to find you. But of course he didn't tell me. By now you should have realized that he memories are all gone." She said. Kaijin looked confused. "That doesn't explain how you found my hideout." "Wow can you really be that clueless... Where do you think the lost memories go?" Sheva asked. "They become hers..." said one of Kaijin's followers. "DING! DING! DING! We have a winner. Now hows about a kiss for a prize." she laughed. They all put up they're stances to defend themselves. "Taven and Rase, hold her off while I get Kensei out of here. X gather all of my followers and follow behind me immediately after." Kaijin commanded. Taven and Rase shook they're heads in agreement. X began running through out the hideout looking all of his comrades. Kaijin completely vanished. "Just as long as we have each others backs we can hold her off until sensei gets back." said Rase. "Wow, you to are very brave considering the situation that you both are in." she laughed. "No... You're brave considering the situation you are in. It's two against one, you haven't got a chance and since we are just holding you off until our sensei gets back. Then we'll back him up to take you out." said Taven. "You want to take me out, that's so sweet. It can just be us two it doesn't have to anyone else." Sheva said. Taven began to stare into her eyes. "Yes, come to me. I want to kiss you and show you what it truly feels like to be loved." Taven blushed and began taking small steps toward her. "HEY TAVEN SNAP OUT OF IT!" Rase yelled. Taven shook his head rapidly. He jumped back. "What was that? I had no idea that I was even walking?" Taven thought to himself. "Hey man don't listen to her words or let her get close to you. You might as well say you're done for if she does." said Rase. "There is no way she is gonna put her lips on me, I'd die before I let that happen." "Well lets find out... There hasn't been a battle that I've been in where my opponent never received a kiss from me." she said. "Well today... WILL BE YOUR FIRST!" Rase yelled as he dashed towards. He kicked in her head but she ducked to dodge the attack. While she was ducking Taven threw several shuriken at her low position. She jumped to get away from them. She leaped so high that she touched the ceiling and flip around to plant her feet flat on its surface. Using her chi she kept her position on the ceiling. "Even Kensei isn't that good at chi control to stick to the wall in the middle of movement. We're out of our league..." Rase thought to himself. All of a sudden the room began to get foggy. "Wait a minute?! RASE HOLD YOUR BREATHE THIS IS THE FOG SHE SPITS FROM HER MOUTH!" Taven yelled to alert him. By the time he noticed what Taven was saying Sheva was behind him. She punched him in the back and he fell to his knees and yelled in pain. He began gasping heavily. "How does it feel. Keep panting, you'll be mine in a few moments. Taven ran at her and prepared to attack, but she avoided his attack and round house kicked him in the wall. He was still holding his breathe so the fog never got into his system. When he looked up he noticed that Sheva was kissing Rase on his forehead. She held her kiss there for a moment. She pulled away and looked into his eyes. Her kiss was printed on his forehead. "That was my Kiss of Control. You see usually my fog makes my prey follow and obey my every command but only until it leaves their system. With just a kiss on the forehead they become mine forever." she said. She leaned close to Rase and let they're lips touch slightly. When she pulled away she spoke "There is more where that came from is you can bring him to me." Rase immediately ran at Taven and kicked him in the face. Taven screeched in pain. He picked him up and slammed him into the ground. Upon him connecting with the ground his arms broke. Rase picked him up and walked him over to Sheva. "Thank you so much." she said smiling. Taven was facing Sheva and Rase embraced him so that he could not get loose. She walked over to Taven and began to breathe in his face. The fog took effect and he wanted her so bad. "From what I remember you wanted me before the fog was in your system. I'm sorry to say but this is your end. I hate to kill those who admire me so much but you told me that I will never put my lips on you." she grabbed his chin and tilted his head up towards her. " You were wrong.... Kiss of Death..." She grabbed the back of his head and began to passionately kiss him. Her kiss grew more wild.Upon her saliva entering his mouth and down his throat his heart began to beat slower and slower. After a few more moments he dropped to the floor dead. "To preform the kiss of death the one I kiss must be head over hills for me. Then my saliva acts as a poison to end the life of the one who couldn't resist me. Now where is my other prey..." she laughed at her fallen enemy.


to be continued.....
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PostSubject: Re: What Shall Kensei's fate be?   Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:28 pm

KICKHERASSKICKHERASSKICKHERASS!!!

...Sorry, my temptations are lashing out. I always feel tempted to fight (and defeat, not fall victim to) people who act like they're perfect fighters, especially seductresses. Don't get me wrong, I'm enjoying this story! It's just that she's a villain I'd enjoy being able to defeat.

As for what happens to Kensei... Well, he doesn't seem to have any sort of chance left. As much as I'd love to see him win, that sure won't happen.

Keep it up. It's quite creative, which is valuable for this kind of story.
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PostSubject: Re: What Shall Kensei's fate be?   Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:07 pm

Thanks Star, I really do appreciate you enjoy my writing ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: What Shall Kensei's fate be?   Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:19 pm

If theres one suggestion I have, actually line break.. or whatever they call it. Instead of making it one gigantic paragraph.
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PostSubject: Re: What Shall Kensei's fate be?   Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:24 pm

Thanks for the criticism Yuna ^_^, i was typing on my phone so it was kind hard to do so sorry Smile
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PostSubject: Re: What Shall Kensei's fate be?   Wed Jun 06, 2012 9:03 am

Its cool brah, with that...


*Flee*
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PostSubject: Re: What Shall Kensei's fate be?   Wed Jun 06, 2012 7:10 pm

*Has glasses* Ha! >: D
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