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PostSubject: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Fri Sep 28, 2012 3:12 pm

im sick and stuck at home so i figured i'd write something

first two montsers have no set moves

Dancer (

distracts and lures heros with her dance for other monsters to finish off

vapourous succubus - possesses heroines with a tender loving process

vampire handmaiden - a human girl kidnapped and hypnotised by the Vampire Lady, uses her innocent demeanor, beauty and skills learnt from the vampire to seduce heroes

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has two types of moves, Innocent - when the hero doesn't know she is hostile and Hostile - when she decides to go all out

INNOCENT

Desperate embrace- runs sobbing up to a hero and flings her arms around them, thanking them over and over for saving her. - leads to hostile followup my hero

tears of joy - hugs a hero and crys softly into their shoulder - lowers willingness attack later on massively

thankful kiss - kisses a hero gently on the cheek before whispering thanks into their ear - massive willpower damage, undetectable

HOSTILE

my hero - when the other handmaidens drop their rouse, the handmaiden will put her hands on their hero's cheeks, laugh, and kiss them passionately (insane willpower damage, high chance of charm)

sweet lick - the handmaiden kneels down and attempts to drop the hero's pants, if she manages to then she either begins to give them fellatio or lick them out - high willpower damage and a chance to bring them to the ground where the licking goes on for several turns

sweet kiss - kisses a hero on each cheek then on the lips - moderate damage high chance of charm on female heroes

Sweetcheeks - a variant on sweet kiss, two handmaidens sneak to either side of a hero and kiss them on the cheek similtaneously - high damage, can lead to the move double the fun

double the fun - the handmaidens then lay the hero on the ground and one begins to give him a gentle handjob while the other entrances him with kisses and cheek licking.



Vampire queen - a monster who mainly summons their favourite type of temptress to subdue the other heroes while she pretty much dotes on one of them

Approach - the vampire queen requests that her target stays still, she then slowly approaches them gliding her hands over her luscious body, if they do not back off, or are unable to then it opens up for the rest of her moves.

Pounce - the queen leaps at her victim and knocks them to the ground, she lovingly strokes their face before kissing them once on the lips and each cheek. she then gets off of them and offers to help them up before pulling them into a brilliantly passionate kiss. - massive willpower damage and stun

Suckle - the queen pulls the heroes head between her breasts and gently massages their head with them before pulling out and offering to let them suckle on one of them, they try to resist but as she exposes her nipple it is too much and they agree. while they are suckling the queen gently bites into their neck and begins to draw blood and replace it with a powerful aphrodisiac - huge damage, charms females, heals her


Cradle - the queen effortlessly picks up her target and walks them back to her throne and sits down cradling them lovingly. - allows for these moves

Loving gaze - The Queen stares lovingly into her foes eyes, she smiles comfortingly causing them to snuggle down happily against her. - willpower damage and lowers defence

carress - the vampire queen gently strokes the heroes face neck and chest before kissing them gently on the lips or forehead - causes huge willpower damage

Kiss from a queen - The Queen raises her captives head so that they are level with eachother before slowly extending her tongue and licking their lips, she then kisses each of their cheeks over and over again before giving them a soft, loving french kiss - insane willpower damage, 100% charm chance on females.

il post 2 more monsters tomorrow and the main story


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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Fri Sep 28, 2012 8:45 pm

Good stuff! Looking forward to seeing the other monsters you plan to post. I really gotta finish the one I've been working on....
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Fri Sep 28, 2012 10:41 pm

Excellent, as always. I am very interested in the vapourous succubus, because I think femdom possession is sexy. Also, I love the Vampire Queen, but that is nothing new, haha.
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Fri Sep 28, 2012 10:43 pm

Also, the link is dead. Can you fix that?
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Sat Sep 29, 2012 10:05 am

I copied and pasted it then it worked. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Sat Sep 29, 2012 11:59 am

shadowmancer - a powerful witch who uses darkness and shadows to ensnare her prey
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Moves

blinding kiss - The Shadowmancer blows a kiss to one of her foes, a stream of black vapour flows from her lips and upon collision with its target plunges their vision into darkness.

blind manipulation - The shadowmancer can entice a blinded foe with illusions of her, she probes their minds so that the images can exploit their inner fantasies - massive willpower damage - charms female heroes

shadow kisses - Summons a jet black clone of herself by her opponent, the clone immediately begins to kiss, lick and carress them lovingly - moderate damage for 2 -3 turns

shadow envelope - the summoner creates a shadow around her victim that first envelops them, binding them and then splits into the form of two women that kiss them on each cheek while keeping them still - stops them from moving and does slight damage, low chance of charm on females

selective blinding - the shadowmancer blows a kiss to one of her foes as she does with her regular blinding, but this time the effect allows them to see what she wants them to, i.e another temptress or a charmed heroine. - allows for uninterrupted seduction as it distracts them from the battle going on

Shadow summon - Releases shadows from her hand that bind a hero and pull them to her, she kisses them passionately, allowing her shadow magic to flow through them at the same time - insane willpower damage and almost 100% charm.


Yuki Onna - an elemental ice demon who uses her looks and charms to freeze heroes hearts, essentially enslaving them - http://theflush.publishpath.com/Websites/theflush/PhotoGallery/249223/ice%20girl.jpg?0

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icy wind - The Demoness's mere presence causes a chill in the air that decreases a heroes speed over time

chilled kiss - the yuki onna blows kiss to her foe in the form of a large blue heart, upon collision it causes intense please before an even greater feeling of coldness. - slows hero and does massive willpower damage

Cold Embrace - Lets out a warmth from her body towards one foe, she then opens her arms, inviting them for a hug, tempted by the warmth they run to her and embrace her. She gives them the warmth they so despareatly want for a few seconds before quickly turning cold, the shock is so great that most heroes wont be able to pull away and she will be able to work her magic on them easily

Warm Kiss - Targets a female foe and walks up to them, and pulls them in for a kiss, a feeling of warmth floods through their body but in reality they have had all their body heat drained and by the time she breaks the kiss, will have become another Yuki Ona
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Sun Sep 30, 2012 8:22 am

I know ive said this before... but you should REALLY write more of these, that my hero ability.... many nice thoughts of falling for that
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Sun Sep 30, 2012 12:19 pm

why do my links never work, and darksophina i would if i had the time
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Mon Oct 01, 2012 5:27 am

still sick so il write another monster before i get to the story - read to the end for an announcement

Harpy - a winged beauty who, although she lacks physical strength, uses her superior agility and beautiful song to entice and capture her victims - pic NSFW http://tinyurl.com/8m9wujd

Moves

Blown Kiss - while flying around the Harpy stops, finds her "favourite" target and blows them a kiss and winks sexily - no actual effect other than arousing and slightly confusing them

Glide Kiss - The Harpy flies down to a target and quickly wraps her wings around them, she then presses them against the soft feathery wall that encases them and desperately french kisses them - moderate willpower damage for 2-3 turns


Sneaky kiss - The Harpy flies behind an unsuspecting victim and kisses them on the back of their neck, when they turn around in surprise she will use one of two moves

Sweet embrace - The Harpy hugs her victim tightly against her while covering them in short, sweet kisses - charms females massive willpower damage

Grounded love - The harpy lowers her foe gently to the ground and begins to gently lick their face before giving them a long, soft french kiss, if the target is male she will also stroke their penis with her soft wings - insane willpower damage, especially to males

Song of Invitation - She lands gracefully facing one opponent, spreads her wings wide and begins to sing an enticing song, their opponent approaches them, the harpy grabs them, hugs them and flies them slowly to their nest kissing them all the while. If they reach the nest without being interrupted it is pretty much the end of that heroes career as anything but a loving slave.
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Mon Oct 01, 2012 5:30 am

story coming in about 8 hours. Anyway announcement


My rpg, for the moment is not in development due to lack of funds and time to work on it. however i am currently learning c# programming so hopefully i'l be able to make more games, mugen characters and a better rpg than i would have before.

to make up for this every month at the end of each month i will be releasing a standalone dungeon featuring monsters i have written, from the requests ideas thread or original ones. the first dungeon, that will stick to a Halloween theme will come october 31st
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Mon Oct 01, 2012 11:59 am

Lol no male finisher kiss for Yuki onna?

What if you put a spell that prevents them from leaving
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Mon Oct 01, 2012 7:37 pm

I kinda wish you did more with the Yuki Onna, they're one of my favorite fictional creatures. But then again, my Yuki Onnas are usually in beautiful kimonos, soooo...

Looks pretty great, you're showing a lot of creativity.
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Tue Oct 02, 2012 5:51 pm

anon64 wrote:
story coming in about 8 hours.
I think its well above 8 hours
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Wed Oct 03, 2012 1:53 pm

@yuna something came up sorry

The Party - Erick (Thief) Lara (Black Mage) John (Warrior) and Anna (White Mage)

The Party had fought their way to the lair of a Vampire Queen said to be amassing an army of hypnotised slaves. The dark castle towered above them as they tentatively ventured inside.

They traversed the huge main hall until they came to a wooden door, Erick opened it a fraction, looking through the gap he saw a comfortable looking bedroom with one door on the other side of it, it seemed empty so they ventured in.

They crossed the room towards the adjacent door when it swung open and someone stepped into the doorway. It was a woman who seemed to be dressed in a bellydancers outfit, Erick drew his knife ready for a fight. She began to dance, slowly gyrating her hips, rubbing her hands over her elegant figure. The whole party stopped dead, distracted by her beautiful dance,

Suddenly John felt a hand on his shoulder, the spell was broken and he whipped around to see what appeared to be the jet black silhouette of a woman. The figure raised its hand to his face and gently stroked his cheek, it then slowly leaned in and kissed him tenderly, John smiled uncontrollably as the Shadow Girl began to kiss him over and over again while massaging his groin with her other hand. None of the other Party members had noticed this while they stood enraptured by the dancer. The shadow figure gave John one last kiss before slowly fading away revealing a beautiful white blonde haired girl in a jet black dress. John realised that it was a shadowmancer and drew his sword, the girl panicked and ran away, seeing no reason to go after her he turned on the dancer and slashed once at her, the managed to avoid the hit but in doing so had stopped dancing so the party was freed from her hypnotic spell, the dancer through down a pellet that released a thick pink smoke and vanished. "That was close" Erick gasped

"Yeh" John agreed, choosing not to mention his close encounter with the Shadowmancer for reasons he wasn't quite sure of.

"We really need to be more careful" Lara added as they pressed on.

After a while the adventurers came across a large treasure chest surrounded by a deep pit, they were wandering how to cross it until they heard a womans scream from the end of a long corridor, "Please save us, Help!"

Lara told the other warriors to go on ahead and let her figure out the chest, they agreed and left her alone in the pit chamber. Lara looked around for anything that she could use to get herself to the chest when she heard a light sing song voice

"Looks like you could do with a pair of wings..."

"Who said that?" as the words left her lips she saw a harpy flying towards her, she tried to dodge out of the way but she was caught by a wing and suddenly trapped between them, the harpy licked her lips and leaned towards Lara who instinctively leaned back into the soft bed of feathers, of course this did nothing to stop the harpy who adjusted herself before giving Lara a French kiss, her soft tongue snaked around Lara's mouth, as ecstasy flowed through her but she managed to come to her senses and use a force spell to through the Harpy off her.

Meanwhile the rest of the party had reached the room the pleads for help were coming from, there was a heavy steel lock on the door, Erick pulled out a small device and placed it in the keyhole, a couple of seconds later there was a small bang and the lock shattered. They entered a room where 3 girls in maids uniforms were apparently cleaning the castle. They immediately dropped what they were doing and ran to each of the heroes, Erick suddenly found himself with a pretty redhead crying into his shoulder, he patted her on the back affectionately as one ran to John and gave him a desperate hug and repeatedly thanked him, Anna felt someone kiss her cheek, she turned to face them as the cute blonde maid thanked her, Anna didn't realise she was blushing bright red.

The maid hugging John suddenly adjusted herself so he was looking her in the eyes , pressed her hands firmly to his cheeks and laughed happily before pulling him in for a long passionate, loving kiss, as she broke away John pulled her close to him, she laughed and kissed him once more, as she did so Johns whole body was racked with ecstasy, she pulled away once more and whispered to him softly

"Come with me, and we'll never have to be apart..." as the last word left her lips she gently kissed John on the cheek and offered him her hand. He took it instantly and she quickly slipped out of the room with him.
Anna barely had time to react to Johns maids actions before hers quickly pecked her cheek again, then the other, then back to the first, she carried on quickly at first but over time she started to make slower more tender movements, if she wanted to Anna probably would have been able to attack and escape, if she wanted to... The girl then began to kiss Anna on the lips over and over, unable to stop herself Anna started to grope the maid lustfully.

While this was going on the redhead had Erick completely enamored by her kisses, she took hold of his hand and slowly sat down, Erick followed with out even realising, all he wanted was to be as close the maids lips as possible, she then moved so that she was sitting on his lap facing him and kissed him again and he let out a contented moan, she smiled adoringly at him and leaned forwards, pressuring him to lie down, as soon as he did she began to take his pants off, she kissed his erect penis once and was about to do a lot more when Lara, who had shaken the harpy arrived. She saw what was going on and cast her most powerful healing spell. It worked even better than she had hoped, aswell as restoring the party to their senses, it also broke the hypnotism on the maids who ran away panicking.

The party, sans john got up and thanked Lana when suddenly a chill filled the air, looking up they saw 3 women enter the room, one was no doubt the vampire queen, pale skinned and completely nude,to her left was a blue haired woman, probably a Yuki Onna and on the right of the queen was a girl dressed in a long black dress, the shadowmancer that had tempted John.

The queen spoke softly " You freed my maids... never mind, I'l have equally cute ones by the time this ends..." she looked Anna directly in the eyes and licked her lips before turning to Erick "And you my dear, you'll get the joy of being allowed to experience the pleasures my castles residents can give for eternity..." Erick drew his knife
"Not likely" he snapped, the Queen simply laughed, the three women approached a hero each.

The Queen smiled at Anna once more and cooed "You stay right there sweetie" she then began to slowly walk towards her while running her hands over her amazing figure, Anna stood transfixed, still not fully over her run in with the maid.

meanwhile the Yuki Onna had reached Lara, she spread her arms wide and smiled bewitchingly to the shivering heroine, a blast of warm air seemed to radiate from the temptress and Lara ran to her and squeezed herself against her tightly, The demoness allowed her to stay there for a while before pulling her into a deep corrupted kiss. A beautiful warmth flooded through laras body as the Demoness worked her magic.

While this was going on Erick found himself trapped by the shadowmancers apparitions, the silhouette girls kissed him over and over, rendering him unable to help either of his companions.

Anna had allowed the Queen to get close to her, for a while she did nothing harmful, she just smiled at her thrall and stroked her cheek with her delicate fingers, she then quickly wrapped her hand around the back of Anna's head and pulled her face in between her breasts, shocked, Anna attempted to pull away but as the Queen started to churn her breasts rythmically with her head between them all resistance faded, Anna then found herself being pulled out from in between the queens supple breasts and found herself staring into her beautiful grey eyes. Without even looking down the queen took hold of one of her own breasts and held it up to Anna, in less than a second Anna had begun sucking on it, she didn't even notice the queens fangs sinking into her neck. When the queen had had enough of Anna's blood she released her but opened her arms invitingly, Anna stepped forwards and the queen lifted her up and took her to a large throne at the edge of the room, she sat down, still cradling Anna like a small child and kissed her gently on the forehead, Anna let out a happy moan and snuggled herself into the queen, resting her head on her breasts.

Meanwhile the shadow summons had grown tired of merely kissing Erick and had begun to play with his penis, they took turns stroking it gently until one of them plucked up the courage to lick it gently, they then switched to taking licks each. Erick stared helplessly at the Shadowmancer but she just smiled back triumphantly, suddenly the Yuki Onna appeared and kissed the Shadowmancer on the cheek, the girl flicked her wrist and the two silhouettes disappeared, the shadowy girl then blew a kiss to Erick and his vision blacked out, panicking he turned around to see someone approaching him out of the darkness, it was Lara, except something was different, she seemed somehow more dangerous, and more beautiful, she reached him and knelt down, she kissed the head of his penis gently, her mouth felt incredibly cold, she then began to slowly pump his penis in her mouth, playing with the tip with her ice cold tongue, the sensation was strange, but immaculate, within less than a minute Erick came, and shortly after passed out.

sorry it was late, hope it was worth it. one of the few stories i've written that i might actually write a direct sequel to, if i do i'll post it in this thread
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Wed Oct 03, 2012 11:08 pm

I think you missed the Vaporous Succubus, but otherwise seems good to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Wed Oct 03, 2012 11:54 pm

Yeh but if I do write a sequel she'll definitely be in it I just couldn't work out where to put her in this one
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Fri Oct 05, 2012 2:58 pm

A new party to kiss...
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:58 am

I re read this recently and decided to make a part 2


I'm gonna get straight into the story though, no enemy descriptions, as i'm making an rb9 styled bestiary so they'll be included in there

Erick woke up to the feeling of someone stroking his forehead, he wearily opened his eyes to see what must be another Maid Girl leaning over him, smiling fondly down at him.
"Oh, you're awake" she cooed "I'll let the mistress know that you're ready for the game now, there should be a new party of adventurers coming soon"

"Whuuh," murmured Erick, still half asleep and confused

"Oh, don't worry. She'll explain it to you in good time" but then the maid suddenly sounded panicky "Oh, but they'll need some time to prepare, I'm just gonna give you something to keep you still for a while, okay?"

Before Erick could react she began to kiss his entire body all over, as quick as she could, within a matter of seconds Erick found himself unable to move at all as a vague, pink pleasure stemmed from everywhere the maid had touched and shrouded his mind.

When Erick finally came to the made had gone, slowly he got up and examined his surroundings, he was in a elegant bedroom, and had been lying on a exotic heart shaped bed, on the bedside table he saw a note, it read

Dear Erick

I hope you enjoyed your rest sweetie, and i just know you'll enjoy what is going to happen next. You see darling, here in the queens castle, we just love to play games, thats why you haven't been enslaved, the Queen wanted to make you into just another cleaner, but i knew you would be perfect for these. Anyway the rules of the game are simple, hopefully, as you are reading this another party of adventurers has entered the castle, the East Wing to be exact, they don't know it yet, but they will be helping you through this game. Sorry I always get sidetracked when i'm excited, you will attempt to escape the castle and win your freedom, why anyone would want to leave here I dont know, but anyway, if you are caught and subdued by any of our beautiful residents, you will be returned to your room to wait for your next game. There is no danger here Erick, none of us wants to hurt you, all we want to do is show you a good time, so are we really the villains your church makes us out to be, anyway i just want you to relax and enjoy your first game...

Love From Anna

Next to Anna's name, there was a lipstick mark, just from looking at it Erick could imagine how great kissing her would feel. Erick looked around for a window or something he could escape out of the easy way...Nothing

"So i guess i do have to play your game" Erick walked to the door and opened it, as he left the bedchamber he thought about why Anna, one of his friends, would be part of it, he couldn't remember much about how he got to the bedroom but thinking back he remembered the queen cradling her in her arms and taking her away, so if he did find her, she would probably be beyond saving...

He found himself in a long corridor, with doors lining each wall, tentatively he opened the first door on the left, looking inside he saw a small, empty room, he took a step forward, and as soon as he entered it, he felt someone kiss him on each cheek, two cute girls in bikinis had been hiding behind the door, and now one of them, threw herself at him and wrapped him in a warm hug while the other, who looked somehow colder than the other smiled devilishly at him, she spoke in a voice like honey

"We could end the game now you know, but wheres the fun in that, infact i think its kind of cute how naive you were" As she said this the one hugging him let go and joined her sister before speaking in an equally beguiling voice

"You didn't even check behind the door did you," she giggled "listen, as much as we want to keep you here, its always more fun when the game lasts longer than 2 minutes!" she and her sister laughed musically and the first sister carried on

"So, seeing as you haven't even joined up with the party yet, we're going to help you out a little bit hun, Give him the amulet Sis" The other girl approached him and pulled a necklace from around her neck "It's dangerous to go alone, take this" she slowly placed it over his head, "Trust us, it'll come in handy, and give you something to remember us by, well other than this" she slowly moved in and gave him a short, but passionate kiss, "anyway, we'll see you later handsome" Suddenly the two sisters vanished in a puff of sweet, pink smoke.

'right' Erick thought ' i definitely need to be more careful' he decided not to risk any more of the doors and instead walked quickly down the corridor, absentmindedly stroking his cheek where the hugging sister had kissed him, the corridor ended in a crossroads, he looked left, the corridor was quite dark but he could smell a sweet perfume lingering in the darkness, to his right the corridor looked a lot more inviting, a fine red carpet was rolled out across the floor and it was lit by several candles, giving it an almost romantic feel, he decided that left was his best bet, he had always been a sucker for romance, and that would almost certainly come back to bite him if he chose right, so he headed into the darkness

It was almost pitch black and the perfume was numbing his senses, but he noticed a fate blue glow coming from inside his shirt, he reached in and noticed the amulet that the sisters had given him was emitting a startling blue light, he held it out, it was a blue heart shaped gem, maybe they really did want to help him after all, he carried on reassured by the light and eventually he came to a large wooden door, tentatively pushed it forwards, nothing, so he tried pulling it, it swung open inside was a large hall with a girl dressed in a tight black silk dress dancing in the middle, Erick drew his knife, which he was surprised that his captors hadn't taken from him and approached her, as she noticed him she stopped her dance and smiled compellingly at him

"Hello darling," she purred, her voice soft and sultry, she began to walk towards him, a overwhelmingly sweet smell coming off her "How nice of you to join me..." the perfume was dulling Ericks senses now "Don't worry, I'll show you the most wonderful of times, I'm sure to be your favorite player, the one you look for every time you play our games" the perfume had Erick in a very weak state now "Shall we begin..." She reached out her hands and placed them on his waist, Erick mirrored this without thinking and she began a slow, sensual dance. Erick was almost defeated already, when the amulet let out a huge jolt of energy into his chest, the sharp pain allowed him to regain some of his senses hand he immediately let go of girls waist, she didn't seem fazed by this however as she still had a firm grip on him so her perfume could still work its magic.
"Ooh, how did you do that, most impressive" as she spoke she flicked her beautiful blond hair so it was over one shoulder, Erick stared at the silky strands, the perfume was almost too strong to resist even now

"Do you like my hair handsome..." she purred " Smell it if you want to, Its a smell you will learn to love" she then quickly leaned forwards and kissed Erick gently on the lips, he leaned in and sniffed, "Mmm, thats good isn't it, take in all of my beautiful perfume" when Erick finally pulled away from her it was.too late, he was pay the point of no return, "baby, let's finish this" She pulled him into a passionate kiss and lowered him to the ground and carried on kissing him, he felt his eyes getting heavy, he was about to black out, overwhelmed by pleasure, when someone pushed her off him,
"get up son, your alright" he felt someone grab his arm and pull him to his feet "Drink this"
Someone handed him a bottle and Erick wearily drank from it, suddenly he felt completely normal, his mind was 100% clear, looking around he saw no sign of his perfumed assailant but instead saw what looked to be a party of 3 people, a warrior, a thief and a black mage, Erick thanked his rescuers and was about to explain his situation when a girls voice boomed overhead
"Welcome, fine adventurers, it is sad to say that you will never be able to leave this castle, you seem to have met Erick, someone who, like you thought he could slay our queen, he couldn't, now he is trying to escape, can you aid him in his game, or will you end up like him"
Ha, we just came in, the exit's right back" the Warrior started, but as he spoke a bright blue magic barrier cut through the middle of the room, sealing the thief and erick on one side, and the warrior and the mage on the other, the warrior turned to run for the door they must have come through, only to find the barrier quickly seal it.

"Now where would be the fun in that" the girls voice once again spoke "Go on boys, try and find a way out"

Erick looked at the thief "No point going that way" he gestured to the door he had come through "It just leads to the room i was held in, I'm Erick by the way"
"I'm Alex" he replied and then shouted to the mage "Any chance of getting that barrier down"
The mage's magically muffled reply came as a dejected no, "Right then" Alex said "I Guess there's only one way to go then, the two headed through a large double door into a another long hallway, as they ventured in they realized that the floor was covered in ankle high water
"Strange, keep a look out" Alex warned

As they carried on a beautiful song reached their ears, this worried them but there was no other option, they kept moving forwards until the water got deeper. They had come to a pool with a solitary rock in the middle, on the rock lay a breathtakingly gorgeous, not to mention nude, girl, no doubt the source of the singing. She noticed them and dived into the water, she swam gracefully to them.
"I'm Syren" she spoke in a voice as beautiful as her song "Don't worry, I wont take you like the other girls will, I'm just here to show you what we can offer before you carry on" As she spoke she had put both of her hands on Alex's shoulders, Alex stared enchanted into her eyes. Erick moved to interrupt, but as he did Syren quickly kissed Alex on the lips, causing him to let out a soft moan of pleasure "Run along now, the other girls await" She told him, Alex left the room before calling back "Erick, I'll wait for you, Alright" Syren swiftly pushed Alex against the wall "As he called out "Or you could help!" Syren put a finger to her lips,
"Shhh, he wont help because he knows you don't need help, I have no intention of stopping you from leaving this room, all i want is a kiss" She puckered up and leaned forwards while guiding Erick's hand to her naked breast, Erick leaned towards her, after all Alex seemed fine, their lips met and a overpowering feeling of joy flooded through him, Syren broke the kiss after a few seconds "How kind of you..." she whispered "Anyway, you're free to go now" she released him, but Erick put his arms around her and hugged her tight
"How about one more, for luck" He begged
"Oh alright then" Syren leaned in and kissed him once more. Feeling overjoyed Erick left the room, although he still wasn't sure why Syren had let him go...

Erick met with Alex in the next room, "What the hell was that about?" Erick wondered allowed
"I dont know, but i sure as hell don't care" Alex replied, the Mage and Warrior burst through a door next to them.
"Are you two alright" the mage asked,
"They both nodded, "Of course" both choosing not to mention their encounter with syren.
"Good then," The warrior nodded "I'm Luke, and this is Daniel" He nodded to the Mage, "Anyway lets go"

They headed to the end of the corridor uninterrupted and entered what appeared to be a large dining hall, a long table layed out in the middle and a throne at one end. Sitting on the throne was a figure Erick recognised, Anna.
She got up and walked towards them, they stared at her apprehensively as she walked past each one of them in turn, as if sizing them up, as she inspected Erick she whispered "Hey sweetie..." and blew him a kiss, she then walked back to her throne and snapped her fingers, as she did four puffs of pink smoke appeared, revealing a lamia with sleek black hair, a beautiful girl in a masquerade mask, a vampire girl, and Syren.

The Temptresses immediately advanced, with Syren moving the quickest, she ran quickly up to Erick and pushed him against a wall, she ran her hand slowly along his cheek and smiled
"Don't worry Erick..." She kissed him on his left cheek, "I'm just going to keep you busy until my friends are done with yours" Erick felt a beautiful warm sensation where her lips touched him, Syren whispered soothingly to him
"I knew you liked me when you asked for that second kiss," her lips gently met his other cheek "Now just stay with me for a while, then Anna can show you how good we can truly make you feel" She carried on kissing him, alternating between cheeks, and sometimes his lips, Erick could only stand there with a look of enraptured joy on his face.

Meanwhile Daniel the mage found himself confronting the sleek form of the Lamia. She slowly moved her hand to her mouth and kissed it, as she lowered it Daniel noticed a large translucent heart hovering above her palm, "Looksss good doesn't it..." The Lamia spoke, and blew the heart towards the stunned mage, It collided with him and seemed to sink into his body, a short burst of overwhelming pleasure clouded his vision and while he was unable to act, the Lamia coiled herself loosely around him and as Daniels vision cleared, he saw the Lamia licking her lips with her delicious, soft looking tongue
"You liked that didn't you..." she teased "Whats your name sweetie, I want to know the name of the man who loves me so..."
Daniel felt a strange urge to answer, after all, she had made him feel so good "Daniel." The words came out softly
"Oh, what a ssimply perfect name" The Lamia leaned even closer, so that their lips were almost touching "Tell me Danny, do you like being this close to me" Daniel opened his mouth to reply but "Shhhh, dont talk..." As she said this her serpents tongue flickered on her thralls lips "Here's whats going to happen Danny, I'm going to offer you a kiss, if you accept it, I'll give you a little love bite when we're done. and you'll be with me forever..." The Lamia puckered her lips and closed her eyes, every urge in the Mages body was telling him to get away, but something about her beautiful well formed lips held him still, the longer he stared at them the more he wanted to feel them against his, until the urge was too strong. Daniel leaned in and accepted the Lamia's kiss, "~mmm how delicious" she murmured, she then broke the kiss and gently bit into Daniels neck, as soon as his skin was pierced he felt a huge sensation of love flow through him, all he knew was that he wanted to be here with her forever.

While this was going on the Masquerade girl had reached the warrior, she slowly walked around him, stroking his neck and kissing any exposed skin, by the time she had gotten back the warrior was staring blankly at her, she lifted one leg up and wrapped it around him, "Mmm, hello luke" she purred
"How did you know..."
"I cann read your thoughts silly" she cut him off "And right now I know that you are very, very attracted to me"
"Uh, No i uh"
"Shh, i can see that it will be very, very easy to make you fall completely in love with me..."
She leaned in and gently kissed him on the lips, she let her lips linger for a second or so before gently pulling away
"I can see that you just loved that, It's okay you know, many men would die for a chance to be with me" She kissed him once more, a feeling of lust flooded through Lukes body, but he had to control it.
"Ooh, you're having some dirty little thoughts aren't you, how about i let you see whats under my mask..." she ended this sentance with another kiss, before slowly removing her elegant mask, she was breathtaking, her beautiful lips were only the beginning, she had dazzling green eyes, soft flushed skin and a smile that clearly said "This is the end,,,"
Luke gasped as she gave him a long french kiss, he made no effort to get away, it just felt, so, wonderful, the girl didn't stop either, however she did reach her hand down his pants where a 'tent' had formed and began to slowly stroke his member, all the while keeping going with her beautiful kiss...

Alex found himself confronted by a beautiful vampire girl, she kept him still with her hypnotic gaze while she approached, "Kiss my cheek" she ordered him, trying to judge if the hypnosis was going as planned, it took a while but Alex eventually leaned in and pecked her gently on her pale skin
"Good, now allow me to return the favor" she whispered, before leaning in and doing the same to him, "I'm going to show you a heaven you couldn't even dream of..." as she said this she jumped up and wrapped her legs around his waist, so that she was straddling him while he was still standing, his hands subconsciously moved to her perfectly formed legs and he kept staring into those beautiful red eyes, She began to gently kiss him while he held her up, first on the cheek, then on the neck, every time her rosy, tender lips touched him, he felt himself becoming more and more tired, so by the time she her lips finally met his, he slumped backwards onto the floor, now the girl was pretty much mounting him and he had no intention of stopping her
"Lets get those pants off shall we, then the real fun can begin..." she slowly removed his pants, then his underwear, "Ooh, you really are excited by this arent you, in that case I'll give you the ultimate pleasure" She adjusted herself so that she was now riding Alex's dick, the soft walls of her vagina were almost enough to make him come alone, then she started to shake her hips, while slowly leaning down towards his face, she kissed him one last time, and as soon as she did he fell into rapturous orgasm.

"Okay Erick baby, looks like it's time to take you to Anna" Syren said warmly and led him over to the throne, Anna looked delighted as he approached, and so did Erick, he felt a soft pleasure welling in his chest he looked down to try and work out what it was, and so did Anna "Syren darling... Take his shirt off for him, Erick allowed Syren to strip him and allowed Anna to inspect the Necklace,
"Oh, you accepted this from the Nymphs, how adorable" she laughed gently and snapped her fingers, two more puffs of pink smoke revealed the Sisters who had given him the amulet, "There was no chance of you winning when you had this on my love, it reacts to me you see..." Anna leaned in and kissed it gently, a surge of pleasure and desire flooded through Erick's body "You always liked me though didn't you... Before i was shown the way of true love, i mean"
"Uhh" Erick stuttered, but before he could speak the twins grabbed one of his arms and kissed him again, only this time they stayed on him, sandwiching him between their beautiful breasts,
"Since you did trust the Sisters though, I'll let them play with you while i concentrate on your... Downstairs" Anna cooed sensually
The sisters began to repeatedly kiss Erick, they licked his neck and stroked his bare chest while Anna knelt down and gently wrapped her mouth around his penis, The twins distraction from the feeling of Anna's beautiful tongue snaking all over his penis didn't last long and they quickly got bored and turned to leave, however the sister who had seemed the most keen on Erick when they first met quickly turned around and ran to him, she stood over the kneeling Anna and gave Erick a rapturous french kiss, her tongue exploring the inside of his mouth and lips was almost enough to make him forget about what was happening down below... she broke the kiss and knelt down too, she tapped Anna on the shoulder and kissed her, the two girls began to kiss passionately before moving so that they were now kissing with Erick's cock in between them, it didn't take long before the combined affects of their lips and tongues caused him to orgasm multiple times. As he slumped to the ground Anna leaned over him and kissed him once on the forehead
"See you in the next Game sweetie"
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Mon Feb 11, 2013 4:01 am

Loved part 2 it was great ^_^, can't wait for part 3
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Mon Feb 11, 2013 2:33 pm

just realised what happened to my vapour succubus promise, yeah...
anyway if i write part 3 (Probably a when) It'll probably follow the same basic plotline as this
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Mon Feb 11, 2013 7:47 pm

i take it you liked the name

to clarify i meant the title "Le donjon de l'amour"
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PostSubject: Re: Le donjon de l'amour (Formerly was bored wrote fic) NOW WITH PART 2   Sun Jun 15, 2014 9:13 pm

This was fantastic anon! Though I know you're busy, and I wouldn't want to rush you, I think this topic is too good to let die. A part three is a must :3
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