My first time at this......

Well after reading the Admin's literature, it got me thinking of making one so here we go

After taking down my first three opponents in the tournament, I was starting to build a lot of confidence in myself and was eagerly waiting my next fight. When I stepped over to the screen to see what kind of person I was up against, I almost bursted out laughing! "This is my next opponent!" I said with enthusiasm "you have got to be kidding me!"

The picture of my next opponent was a girl who looked no older than 18 with a witch-like outfit, pink flowing hair and bright green eyes, skinny and attractive. I thought to myself that she either payed her way to get here or no man would want to fight someone as beautiful as her. Either way I wasnt going to go easy on her.

Beaming with confidence as I headed to the elevator to get to the arena, I thought to myself just how long will this fight last. "3 seconds.... No 2 seconds!" I said to myself almost laughing at the idea. I got the the elevator and waited for the announcer to annouce my name. "Now entering the arean, ladies and gentalmen this man has made his last three opponents look like scrubs compared to him! Lets welcome Teeeeeeerrrrrrrrrry MccccccHuuuuuuuuugh!!!!!!!" The crowd roars with excitement as my elevator raised me to the arena floor. "Next, his opponent, a very attractive witch that confused and made her last three opponents ashamed of themselves, lets put are hands together for Miiiiiiiiissssssssttttyyyy Oooooooooolllliiiivvvviiiiiiiiaaaaaaaa!" The crowd then roars for her to and a lot of whistles from guys all over the arena.

"Now lets begin! FIGHT!" I come out with a burst of speed and go for a right hook, by my surprise she ducked it and uppercutted me right into my stomach. I bent over from the pain and I was face level with her, she looked into my eyes and said, "Oh! arent you a cute one!" Then she gave me a little kiss on the lips. I jumped back, not really expecting that nor comprehending why she kissed me. Either way I still need to fight! I stayed back hoping for her to make a move so I could counter it, but what she did took me by surprise again! She bent down, put her hand on her hip and the other hand over her mouth, then she kissed her hand and blew it at me. I saw a big, pink heart come from her hand and made its way towards me. So I ran to the right of it, but it was like a heat seeking missile! I followed me and caught up with me and entrapt me inside of the heart shaped prison! Stunned, I couldnt move to get out of it and I saw her coming closer to me. She then stepped inside of the heart with me and wrapped her arms around me gave me a long, deep kiss. I felt my vision fade away from me and I felt no more desire to fight anymore. She looked down at me and said, "awwwww, I was expecting more out of you...... Oh well, sleep tight my love!" She bent down and gave me one final kiss and then she walked away to face her next opponent.

that was prety good

Figured it was kinda hypocritical to ask for responses to my own story without providing a response to others. Sorry about that...

I liked it, though it was a bit short. And it's been a year, so I was curious if you had any new ideas.

lol its all good, yea it was just something I made up spontaniously really. If i gave it some more thought, I was thinking of making a fighting game just made up of one male character and like ten female character and each female character has a "special" move that they can do to the male character, but at the moment I am still working on Legend of Legaia and trying to get to sol tower.

That sounds like a good idea. ^^ Good luck getting there, dude.

Mkmd13 wrote:

lol its all good, yea it was just something I made up spontaniously really. If i gave it some more thought, I was thinking of making a fighting game just made up of one male character and like ten female character and each female character has a "special" move that they can do to the male character, but at the moment I am still working on Legend of Legaia and trying to get to sol tower.

Funny you should mention that... I didn't want to say anything until I could confirm it, but it seems like Yukijirushi Nyugyou(NSFW link) is working on something similar to what you say. I say "seems" because the current demo only allows you to play as a female character, but given Nyugyou's previous work and the fact that each new character added to the demo is accompanied by a picture featuring a man having sex with them I'd say it's a safe bet that when the "real" version comes out it will either feature at least feature a male playable character. I have no idea when the real version will come out though (or if such a thing will be available to the public at all...)


The succubus character seen above actually has a blown kiss attack in the demo (as well as an attack where she tries to smash you with her tits...) To download the demo click the "test12.lzh" link. You'll need the latest DirectX package to play it though...

EDIT: Forgot to mention, but if you need help with your fighting game idea, I'd be more than happy to help.

Admin wrote:

Mkmd13 wrote:

lol its all good, yea it was just something I made up spontaniously really. If i gave it some more thought, I was thinking of making a fighting game just made up of one male character and like ten female character and each female character has a "special" move that they can do to the male character, but at the moment I am still working on Legend of Legaia and trying to get to sol tower.

Funny you should mention that... I didn't want to say anything until I could confirm it, but it seems like Yukijirushi Nyugyou(NSFW link) is working on something similar to what you say. I say "seems" because the current demo only allows you to play as a female character, but given Nyugyou's previous work and the fact that each new character added to the demo is accompanied by a picture featuring a man having sex with them I'd say it's a safe bet that when the "real" version comes out it will either feature at least feature a male playable character. I have no idea when the real version will come out though (or if such a thing will be available to the public at all...)


The succubus character seen above actually has a blown kiss attack in the demo (as well as an attack where she tries to smash you with her tits...) To download the demo click the "test12.lzh" link. You'll need the latest DirectX package to play it though...

EDIT: Forgot to mention, but if you need help with your fighting game idea, I'd be more than happy to help.

Thats weird that someone had the same idea as me! but hey they say that great minds think alike! Anyways yea if you have some ideas, send them my way and I can probably find room to put them in my work. Thank you for the help!

good job are you gonna do a part 2 like a rematch agaisnt her

Damn going through all these old topics and moving them to their proper places led me here and this brings back memories. If anyone else wants to see more to this story, I will be happy to write more.

Sounds good to me